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by JetLevy

schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story and love the interaction going on around poor Lan. Thanks for the update!!
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Would love to be in Lan’s place! Am interested to see the winner of the Ero vs. Rosh situation ^_^

Always a pleasure reading your stories.
person jeazard
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I like that Ero has made his decision final, at least for himself. And I believe he's honest about it, and that it could work between him and Lan. Also, once the rumour became truth the bullying might actually stop. The way I see it, the problem right now is that the women think Lan is taking an available man from them; as soon as Ero were officially off the menu, things might calm down.
Or not, what do I know. XD
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not really a fan of tribal stories, ut this one is amazing! XD I'm really enjoying reading Beats and I hope I'll have the pleasure reading the next chapter soon. ;) I'll wait as long as it takes! :D Eros has a competition. *smirks evily* That will be good for him. And I really like Lan. I feel a bit sorry for him. It's not his fault he's gorgeous. XDD I'm very curious if you plan making somehing happen that would make the villagers accept him. Would claiming by Eros really help? I'm all for the claiming, but that making everything better just sounds too good to be true.
Thanks for writing this! And please, don't let us hanging! There are too many good stories that are abandoned here on this site!
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O man this is great! I loved the conflict so much!!! Keep up the good work, hopefully Lan makes the right choice and sees whats in front of him!
person vicxn
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooooooooooooooooooooh i really really like this fic!!!!!!! Poor Ero, begging Lan aswell! I hope he gives in to him. Keep up the good work and update soon.
Vic xxxx
person kylee123
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter. I can't wait to see who loses the battle of wills. I visited your website. Very nice. I think your idea of updating your website a few days before AFF is a good idea because more people will keep checking your sites for updates. Keep up the good writing.
person jeazard
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm, delightful yet torturous UST, you're so good at it it's not even funny. XD
Can't wait for more!
person jeazard
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. =) The society you created makes a lot of sence, which is always a plus.
Yay Ero/Lan! <3
person Le_Lethe
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ridiculously in LOVE with this story!!! yay! I've had such a shitty few days this really perked me up :) I like how stubborn Lan is and Ero...sneaky sneaky...I AWAIT ANXIOUSLY FOR MORE!