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for The Carnival

by idisappear

schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
These stories are amazing!
schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
If there are no more women left in the world, how do the men reproduce? Can the little boys get pregnant? That might be an interesting direction to take the story in. ;)
person Moko
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Try adding some more people, instead of just more customers. Maybe have one customer want a threesome or something along thoes lines.
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I love the story!!! hope u update soon!!! i have a question, is it possible for him to get pregant?
person red31
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this fic! Hope you'll write more. Preferably with more tit playing. Haha.
person Juana13
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SO FUCKIN HOT!!!!! : )
cant wait for more!
person Soralove07
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it's awsomw:)! Please update soon!
person slash_whore
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
mmmmmmmmmmmmm! this is a delicious fic, please write more more more ;D and i would read anything you write *g*
i read the daddy!fic as well, please update that if you can please *gives you cookies*
you're writing is soo HOT <3
person Ella
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is so hot, it really is. As for ideas, I've always been a big fan of toys, but I'll read whatever you put out. I especially love (you know, besides the sex scenes) how you glaze over the "science" aspect of the Little Girl thing, it's kinda funny. Thanks for sharing this!
person bells on a chocker
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
mm I adore the idea and I'm wondering of the other things that might be in this carnival of yours! due update soon pleas! I ready your daddy fic and am also wondering if your planing on continuing it?? it seemed utterly delicious.