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November 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, goodness, this story is very good! I've noticed that you haven't updated in so long and can only hope that you will sometime soon. I love the characters and I immediately fell in love with Benerit. I'm enjoying how you didn't make the main character something desirable and lusty to the eyes of men. It somewhat irks me when the main character is something of beauty. There's not enough Plain Jane with souls of fire around here. But this story has done its deed and I hope for a next update.
Good story!
Good story!
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November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*poke* Does it live... I am eagerly waiting the next chapter... I know you only have three up but I found this story when you still only had ONE and I loved it... and I keep looking... and I keep seeing nothing... I LOVE IT I love the players and the world and you and everything about you except the fact that you dont update... now do so... RIGHT NOW!
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October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely WONDERFUL! It's so sad. Poor Per! I hope it all works out in the end. I can't wait to read more! I love this! Again, incredible job.
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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. I really enjoy this. Some of the details remind me of Ancient Rome, like the orange priestess' veil of the eldest sister. You have a knack for description.
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July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
seems pretty good. well written at any rate. I cant wait to see where you take it. i hope i do see more of this one.
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June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok so i'm going to be greedy and demand more!
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May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow so Per's daughters are royalty. I wonder if the Lord Barba will know that these are his nieces. Will they have cousins on the Barba side? Obviously she is going to catch the eye of someone important and I guess we know that her powers come from her mom. This is an amazing story, I am so excited to see where you are going to take this. Wonderful writing. I wonder if she will still be considered plain by the Barba people? Love it!!
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May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay an update!! Really really excellent writing. I am intrigued.
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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is a really great beginning! I hope you continue to update. It is so nice when you chance upon quality reading on this site.
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is extremely well written and has the starts of an amazing plot! It was slightly hard to understand when you were talking about one of the woman's loyalness to Per, but that was all. I can't wait to read more of this story!