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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the twins, but right now Desmond is being pretty annoying. Zavier has done a lot for the two of them, sold his body even. As soon as Angelo comes into the picture though, all that is forgotten. Not only does Desmond not stick up for his brother, but he trusts the new guy over his twin even after he hits poor Zavier who had just been terrified out of his mind for his safety.
All in all, great job with the story. Obviously I'm really into it haha
All in all, great job with the story. Obviously I'm really into it haha
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this was a good chapter; but I'm confused: how is Angelo "fixing" Desmond if Desmond still needs blood to live? This is such a riveting story; please update soon!
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm getting more and more intrigued by this story with each chapter you upload. It's really a very interesting plot you're creating here.
And your characters are really intense too. Can't wait to find out all their secrets.
More please!!! ;)
And your characters are really intense too. Can't wait to find out all their secrets.
More please!!! ;)
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April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chappie is a bit of a filler but I like it non the less!!! I think it's great that Avie starts to lose contol and that Desie tries to help him!!! See you next chappie!!!
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April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so good; Desmond finally showing his emotional strength! I can't wait to read more!
Great story!
Great story!
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April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Despite myself I really like this story and the twins are great! I was sucked in after the first paragraph and eagerly awaiting an update. Good job!
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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow this gets really interesting. Hope you update soon cause it is so intnese I can't wait to see how it continues!!
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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, you can't end it there!!!! Hurry up and update; this is an awesome story! I'm not into vampires and shit like that, but this story has me hooked!
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now it get more interesting with every chapter!! I really love it!!! Is Nick a vamire too?? Cause he seems to know what is going on!!! I reall yhope you update soon I can't wait to see how it continues!!
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April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow looks like your story is gonna follow through the dark paths huh? ^_^
it seems we have ourselves a very interesting plot in development. I can't wait to see what happens next.
and may I add I love the fact that your chapters aren't too small like some stories I've read. they're the right lenght for one to get a good enough grasp on what's going on.
hope you update soon! =)
it seems we have ourselves a very interesting plot in development. I can't wait to see what happens next.
and may I add I love the fact that your chapters aren't too small like some stories I've read. they're the right lenght for one to get a good enough grasp on what's going on.
hope you update soon! =)