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Awesome work here! Alex deserves more than just a cough, judging from Olli how much he made the other man suffer!

Aww, Alex is sick... But yes, now Olli can baby him, he he ^_^ Can't wait to see what happens next :) Please keep up the good work!

Great story; I can't wait to see how Alex and Ollie are gonna get along! I'm looking forward to the next update!

Nice update. I laughed when I saw the line about Shawn's parents "finding" themselves. I am glad that they are still alive. Now Alex will get the chance to find out what he did to Olli. I am looking forward to it.

Aww, poor Olli, waiting so long for nothing :( I can't wait to see what happens when Alex goes round his house though ^_^ Please keep up the good work, and update soon! :D

Ohhhhhhh!! Is Alexander attracted to Ollie?? And why did he bully him so much in the younger years!?? ;; Meany Alex! lol

This story's really nice and I can't wait to read more to see what happens next between those two! >___<

Plz write more soon! *hugs*

Great story with well developed characters. Are Oliver and Shawn orphans? It seems as if Alex is having an unlucky spell. I am very interested in reading more.

Yay, a new chapter. Wihiii. Poor Alex. He's never going to get this right. Oliver is totally going to hate him now. How does he expect to get laid acting like that? He needs to step up his game, Alex does. He should be able to do something to at least gain one plus point. Otherwise, the hot dark tall guy is going to slip through his aggressive fingers. Jupp, jupp. You can’t catch a fish with stinking socks as bate. At least, I don’t think you can.
Laugh. I think I’m going to stop my rambling now. Love the story, love the characters. Wanna read more :3

He he he! ^_^ Thank you for another great chapter! :D I like the waiter, ha ha. And Alex seems nicer than Olli remembers him... Which is good, I guess :) Please keep up the good work, and update soon! ^_^

I like it and want to know more :3