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August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved Chapter 7. Olli is coming around a little bit. I loved their conversation in the hospital. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
He he he, I like Shawn ^_^ I'm glad Alex is okay, too :) And that Olli apologised. Looking forwards to seeing what happens in the next chapter ^_^ Please keep up the good work, and welcome back! :D
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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I'm so glad you updated this; I thought it was over! I really like the story; I like the tension between Ollie and Alex. I'm glad Alex is gonna be ok. Looking foward to the next chapter. There were a few misspelled words, ass-whole is asshole, I can't remember the others. If you need someone to proofread it before you post it, you can email it to me. LisaT25@msn.com. I'll be happy to go over it.
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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice update! This was good to read!
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July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. What a development. I hope Alex comes out okay from the accident. This will give Olli the chance to take a second look at him. Great story. I am looking forward to the next chapter
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July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little bummed to be all caught up with this story...and a pretty good spot. Looking forward to seeing what happens when Alex wakes up.
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June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad to see this story here! I thought you weren't going to continue w/it. Poor Alex, OMG, I was at the edge of my seat reading about he crash. I hope he's gonna be ok. But I have a question: if he was so enamored with Ollie since the first day they met, why did he treat him so poorly and beat him up? Looking forward to the next chapter!
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June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wish I could find the right words to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story. It's more than just original, it's a reading experience that we don't get to see on here very often. The storyline is completely believable, and the time you put into the characters' emotions is evident. Thanks for taking the time to share your talent with us. I look forward to checking this site every night when I come home from work, and when I see that you've updated, I know I'm in for a great read. Thanks again for your hard work. Looking forward to the next update.
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June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Alex the hair pulling boy, sadly there are dummies like that out there. But i'm sure he'll make it up later.
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June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, no, poor Alex! But it's so sweet that Olli went to see him and is now lying next to his bed ^_^ I hope Alex is okay... And that they can work everything out, of course :) Please keep up the great work! :D