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by asemanekavir

person Roya
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey there,

Nice beginning! :D

Well being me, I can't wait for the slave part! :P so please update soon and make the chapters longer! :D Thankssss ^_^

I'm just wondering how going to military makes someone a slave! hoommm I suppose I have to expect major bullies! ^.~

Thanks for sharing and update soon! ;)