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UPDATE!!! This is wonderful very well written. I am enjoying this unexpected situation between Asher and Madison. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!

ahh! where'd u go?! i didn't notice this was updated from chapter 1 until now. please come back! u said u'd finish most likely since u had all th chapters planned. please continue!

Wow this story is really gooood!!! Its funny but I can see hints of things getting more serious in the future. I absolutely cant wait for an update to this story im really eager to read more so update SOON!!!!!!!!!

Wow, that was surprisingly fun, I didn't expect a story like this to be here.... I love your style, you actually inspired me to join the site, and start putting out my own stories...I can't wait to read more, maybe you'll read some of my writing once I get some up also? I look forward to the next chapter!

Very entertaining story so far! I like Madison a lot, Adam is hilarious (I hope we'll see more of him in future chapters), and Asher is a likeable ass whom I hope will reform some of his ways and grow on Madison. I'm glad you included a section from his point of view, it made me like him a lot better. Nina sounds like the best-friend-I-never-wanted, and while I hope she proves to be a good person and friend deep down, I can see the potential for her to stir up trouble and create some drama. If/when Madison and Asher get together for real--or perhaps even if their relationship is merely a front for a time--I'm sure Nina's reaction will be massive!

Looking forward to more of this story~!! :D

Yay, another update! Nice chapter, can't wait to see what Mad hits Asher with.

I enjoy this so far, I can't wait for an update. XD

This is actually really good go figure.. lol Usually people on here right like shit! I will so add on you on my lj account. update soon!

I'm in absolute awe at your wonderful story! I LOVE IT. Love-it! Seriously. I can't express how much I just adore it. For two chapters, I'm so freakin' hooked. I just wanna read more! Please! <3

AHHH!! i loved it! or rather loving it so far! I can see me rather liking to know more about these two unlikely pair. The poor girl, the last thing you want when sick, is someone in your bed!! (no matter if he might be a hottie or not!)

Can't wait to read more

ps. I will be adding you on LJ :D