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May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I am SO sad!!!!!! You gotta get those two back together!! OMG, they're both pining for one another and they don't even realize it! Only an outsider like Chase saw it. I can't wait for your next update; this is one of my favorite stories on here! Great job!
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May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh oh, what a lovely welcome...
So Scott is the jealous type,but that was a little bit to much.
Poor jamie, it wasn`t even his fault,he deserves a huge apology!
Please continue soon, Jules
So Scott is the jealous type,but that was a little bit to much.
Poor jamie, it wasn`t even his fault,he deserves a huge apology!
Please continue soon, Jules
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April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great update. Very good chapter and I hope Ryley has some success with Scott and Jamie. Aiden needs to have more faith in hi own skills. He should be able to become captain of the team without getting involved with Kyle's schemes. Plus he has no guarantee that Kyle will really give up his spot for him. I am intrigued. I cant wait to read more.
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April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it! It's so angsty. Poor Ryley :) Anyway, I can't wait for more! I hope to see more updates :)
Until then,
Jades
Until then,
Jades
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April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bad Aiden! Bad bad Aiden! >:(
How can he have agreed to Kyle's bet?! And actualy going through with it, especialy after having finally talked to Ryley and seen for himself how sweet the boy is!?!
I so wanna put him on my nee and spank him!
Update soon please! ;)
How can he have agreed to Kyle's bet?! And actualy going through with it, especialy after having finally talked to Ryley and seen for himself how sweet the boy is!?!
I so wanna put him on my nee and spank him!
Update soon please! ;)
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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! This is...WOW! It's soooo heart wrenching BRILLIANT!!! *sniff*
And it's only the beginning! Argh! >_<
What am I gonna do?? lol >>
Anyways, plz plz plllllllz post more sooooooon! I'm begging and I don't care! I love it this much! XD :)
Thanks alot for the awesome fic! Ur great! *hugs*
And it's only the beginning! Argh! >_<
What am I gonna do?? lol >>
Anyways, plz plz plllllllz post more sooooooon! I'm begging and I don't care! I love it this much! XD :)
Thanks alot for the awesome fic! Ur great! *hugs*
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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved to find out that Aiden had a conscience, if just a small one! He should tell Ryley what Kyle said about him, but then the story wouldn't be so damn good, right? I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story!!!!! (It's so refreshing to read a story that doesn't have a vanpire in it!)
Anyway, I am anxiously awaiting your next chapter; I look for the new chapters everyday, hoping for an update from you! I love your writing!
Anyway, I am anxiously awaiting your next chapter; I look for the new chapters everyday, hoping for an update from you! I love your writing!
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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story finally someone
post something worth reading and not stupid story w/no
plot and only sex(don't get me wrong I love that)but its good
for a new story that you could tell its gonna be good
awwww I super love Jamie and Scott which is weird seeing
as I like primary couple better the secondary :]]
I wanna see what happens with them
update soon plz :]]
post something worth reading and not stupid story w/no
plot and only sex(don't get me wrong I love that)but its good
for a new story that you could tell its gonna be good
awwww I super love Jamie and Scott which is weird seeing
as I like primary couple better the secondary :]]
I wanna see what happens with them
update soon plz :]]
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April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, that wretched Kyle is gonna make Aiden break poor Ryley's heart...I can see it now......anyway, great update! I can't wait for the next one...(Not to rush you or anything...hahaha)
I am really enjoying this story!
I am really enjoying this story!
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! I love your story! I really hope you keep updating it, it's so good. I feel so bad for them already :( Anyway, I will keep looking for updates!
Until then,
Jades
Until then,
Jades