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for This War of Ours

by darkladyknight

person kylee123
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is a great story. It is very well written and the setting is great. I like the language that Moria's people speak. It is a heartwrenching scenario because I can hardly see how they will escape this situation as Moria is kind of being forced to be in his current position. So I am eager to see the next update. thanks for the great story.
person Avernion
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice.
person TrisanaS
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a good series the first time I read it on Fictionpress.
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
person maloanne
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am definetely looking forward for more.
I would say Moria has to seriously improve his seduction technique if he wants to make Bradley at least like him...

bye

M
person saintash
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh this is so so good, there was a bubble in my chest by the end i cant wait for more
person Nanashi
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really looking forward to reading more of this story. I honestly can not wait for the next chapter. Thank You
person maloanne
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well I hope the next chapter comes quickly. I am very curious to know how you will make their relationship evolve!
bye
M
person MissMiki
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my love this story!!! was this up here before?? Or did I read this at FictionPress?? i can't even recall haha But I missed that crazy Moria! haha
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it :) I´m very curious what happen next