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for This War of Ours

by darkladyknight

person SilverEyez
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I've checked everyday for an update lol. The idea of Brad and Moria playing house together is very interesting, I can't wait to see how it turns out.
person kylee123
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I was sad to see Bradley and Moria separate. I could see that Moria did not want to separate from Bradley's side. How can someone cause so much pleasure and pain at the same time? Bradley in the meeting was quite amusing. Realizing that Moria is capable of getting pregnant. I am surprised that he chose to reveal the relationship to his neighbors about Moria. Maybe he thought they would understand the gay relationship. Moria is definitely still haunting Bradley's thoughts. I want them back together.
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see you continued w/this story. So interesting.....the chapter where Bradley and his men were going to be executed; wow, I was at the edge of my seat. Great story!
person kylee123
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Finally a rescue. I am falling in love with Moria more with each chapter. I am happy that Montana and Piza are finally able to be together. Bradley and Moria are so hot together. There is so much attraction between them now. I wonder if Bradley will be able to stay away from Moria in the future.
person Rosei
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So the tables have turned!!!
Love that the lovers are trying to
be something else (enemies) around everyone else
but can't help but touch each other once in awhile!!

This new Reclaimer character is interesting and wondering what
drives him!!!

Thanks for the chapter!!
R
person kylee
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to confess that I love Moria. So wickedly sexy. You can see a touch of youth and vulnerability under all that evilness too. I hope Bradley and his crew can escape somehow. Also the smex scenes in this story are super hot. Wow!
person Rosei
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy Moly!!!!

Fantastic story!!!! The biggest secret on this site!!!!

Thanks,
R
person Rosei
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This is the best!!!! THE BEST!!!!
Violent, well written, erotic, sci-fi, with a touch of romance!!! HA!!!

Thanks!
R

Sorry, I'm spelling challenged!
person kylee
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. This is a fabulous story.
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this yesterday and I am hooked! Unfortunately, I finished all 5 chapters! Will there be more? Is there a disk? What will happen to Bradley and his men if it's not found? I can't wait to read more! Esp. the relationship betwn Montana and Piza; it is so sweet and innocent-like. (Does that even makes sense?) hahha