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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Moria had so sad childhood
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story; I'm so glad you're keeping up w/it. It was interesting learning about Moira's planet and the life bearers and live givers. Did any of them ever have male/female relationships? The visit w/Montana and Piza was good; they are so cute together! But it seems Moira doesn't want any attention from Bradley; why is that? Why is Moira so volatile? Very cute w/the puppy; I hope Bradley explained how buying a dog is a lifetime commitment! And a puppy and a baby; idk, maybe asking for trouble! lol
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, first of all I was so happy to see that you have updated and after reading it I was even happier. It was good to see that Moria at least has one decent parent and at that the guys were getting along better despite the beginning. Great update but poor Moira such a long time until the birth.
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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bradley's smart getting rid of all the knives. It's sweet how he's trying to get closer to Moria. Why is Moria so standoffish? I'm really glad Piza and Montana are together. Can't wait to find out how the doctor plans on taking the baby out when the time comes.
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter. I am glad to see Bradley so happy about the baby. He seems to be very excited about the whole thing. He is also touching and holding Moria more. I like that. Especially since everyone else is so nervous around Moria. I am glad that Bradley is showing some support because Moria seems to be very scared and alone. he wants to rely on Bradley but he is afraid to let down his defences. A little lovemaking would do them both some good.
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow upload. THANK YOU!!!
I hope that Bradley will fall in love with Moria and he will fight with Moria´s fahter
for Moria live.
I hope that Bradley will fall in love with Moria and he will fight with Moria´s fahter
for Moria live.
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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. I love it. Please keep updating it.
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July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Moria´s father is asshole. I´m so glad that Moria is with Brad again.
wow Moria is with child :)
please next chapter
wow Moria is with child :)
please next chapter
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July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so funny when Bradley's neighbor set him up w/a dude! Hahahaha Too bad Bradley was probably thinking of Moira the whole time, that's why he couldn't get into Sean. Too bad for Sean! Now Bradley can have Moira full time, hopefully they won't kill each other!! Hahahah Great chapter!
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July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love Moria. He is the most endearing little villian I have seen in a while. Imagine he was busy marrying and carving his family name into Bradley's chest. I like his confession too about Bradley making his breath catch. Moria is vicious and vulnerable at the same time. I am glad Bradley stepped up when he realized that they were going to have a baby. I can't wait to see what happens next. This chapter was very funny in that subtle kind of way. Great story. It would make a good anime.