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hope this isnt the end i wanna see moria in childbirth ahhhhh hes so cute when not in his invironment lovvvve iiiiittttttt
please update please please please

Just wanted to stop by and say hi...and that I'm hoping you're still working on this story. Because it's very interesting and I'm quite attached to the characters.

So, hopefully the rewriting and editing is going well. Can't wait to see the end result. Not holding my breath any more ('cause I'd be dead by now!) but highly hopeful of a finished story eventually. ^_^

Thanks!
Rae

I am so happy to see Moria's parents getting back together! I love Moria more with each chapter I read. I loved the bedroom scene with the storms and lightning. Bradley is already in love with Moria. They just need to seal the deal with some hot loving! I thought it was interesting that the knife play seems to be a part of the mating ritual on Moria's planet. If only Bradley could see that. LOL. Your writing does have a special touch to it. All your characters are so lovable. Please update soon. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

I'm glad to see Moira getting closer to Bradley. He really shouldn't push Bradley away; he's gonna need all the help he can get when the baby comes.

thanks for upload :)

I was waiting for an update. :-) You know when Moria first got the puppy I was a little worried that he might end up hurting the poor thing, but now Moria's so mellow. It's pretty cute. UH-OH hostile take over!!! Can't wait for more!!!!

Dang this story is so sweet!!!!!

Thanks!

R

Thanks for the update. This is my favorite story on this site & I check on it often. The wait is long, but worth it every time! :)

This was a great chapter. No knives for Moria but he does get a puppy. Classic.

Keep up the great work!

Love the story! can't say that enough. The storyline is really original,and not something a person would see everyday. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh my goodness. Chapter 11 was beyond awesome! The trip to the baby store and the puppy for Moria made me so excited. Please let this lead to Bradley and Moria making love again. I kind of miss Moria doing kinky things to Bradley. The whole chapter was fabulous. It was very interesting to meet Moria's life bearer. What a sad story there. It is sad to imagine that Moria just wanted to be a life bearer and to have a baby. Bradley is obviously very much in love with Moria. He just doesn't realize it yet. He did ask about sex though o.O
I am really looking forward to the next chapter of this story.