rate_review Reviews

Wow, been a long time since I've read any of your work. Been writing and drawing more than I've been reading. I'm trying to do everything in moderation...but yeah. Anyway, onto the actual part of the review!

I like this so far. I really do like the setting because it's different and I've always did like the times of knights and codes and monarchies and such. The way they talk seems authentic, too. I am glad that you're not having them have sex, yet. The build-up and anticipation is the best. Not only that, but I like Rennar's character. He's admirable, yet not a saint. He indulges in his bodily needs, yet he restrains from giving into Silvanos' persistent sexual advances. Why? Because it's his code of honor not to sully him. Technically, Silvanos has already been violated by non-consensual means, so a consensual one wouldn't hurt. Of course, Rennar isn't thinking that way and is thinking first about serving his lord (and keeping Silvanos protected). I understand his way of thinking and I respect it. In some ways, Silvanos is being a brat, but then again, he's only being human by going after something he wants. In some ways, he is more mature than Rennar. I can't blame him for it and in actuality, he has something Rennar's whores and other women don't seem to have. >;)

Anywho, great story so far and I'll keep a look out for it. And review, of course.

Oh, this one is good too. I'm glad Rennar got a good smack at the end, the big meanie. Looking forward to more.

Congratulations on your book news. I think I am about to go mad from frustration. Poor Silvanos! Blocked again. Well at least he got a kiss. I think he has succeeded in planting the seeds of desire in Rennar's brain. I am eager to see what happens next.

this is good...and this little guy definitely has spunk...can't wait to read more. thanks for updating.

Oh wow KD,

I come back from uni and allow myself some time to read AFF and find a new story!
I am loving this! I really want to know what happens between those two...Gah! Arelia really
knows how to get someone riled up! Maybe he pushed him too far...ohhhh the consequences haha!
Lovely story!

R xx

Rennar you party pooper! Don't lock the door! I have to say I love Arelia. I think his little attempts at seduction are so cute. I am cheering for him all the way.

Oooh he pissed the Captain, wonder what he will do now...

Ouch. Poor Arelia. Rejected and confined to his room. That really sucks. I can't wait to see what happens next,

already very intriguing.
can't wait for more.

plot looks good