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March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I've always wondered why yaoi gets more reviews too.
I personally prefer to read yuri/lesbian js.
Loving this fic by the way, great story!
I personally prefer to read yuri/lesbian js.
Loving this fic by the way, great story!
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December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting stuff. I want more.
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September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I’m loving these characters. No seriously. Considering it’s only two chapters long, Viv and Sam seem so alive. I really want to know what happens next. Update! Update! Update!
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January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
una historia alucinante, perfecta, ya que nunca hay comentarios sobre el tema de las lesbianas, cuando lei esta me hizo mojada. maria ana
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September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff, can't wait to read more.
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September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah~ the writing was so good. Chapter 1 was hot, and chapter 2 was sweet.
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September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's well written and I like your character development, although it sometimes gets confusing from who's point of view you're writing from. hope you update soon.
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August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY! A well written lesbian story. Sounds kind of like a roleplay me and my amazing girl friend did one time to spice it up, me being the one cuffed to a chair. Very nice :D
~Aiden
(I R Grl)
~Aiden
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July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think the problem is the shear number of fangirls that throw logic to the wind and right irrational and, frankly, annoying yaoi fanfics. Given any anime, there will probably be about 50 yoai fics for every yuri fic. My best example is Bleach. There are legitimate, almost out in the open, lesbian relationships (prime example: Yoruich and Soi Fon), and yet you see things like Ichigo and Ulquiorra or Ichigo and Renji. It's just plain daunting.
Anyway, I really liked the story. I especially love how Samantha became so helplessly entranced just after meeting Vivian. As soon as I read her describing her, I knew that she was done for.
Anyway, I really liked the story. I especially love how Samantha became so helplessly entranced just after meeting Vivian. As soon as I read her describing her, I knew that she was done for.
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April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't have an account, so I ususally don't review... But I had to review this one. Fully fleshed characters, with motives! Motives being the operative word- most of the time, the characters stagger around, doing what they're told because the writer needs them to react a certain way. A nice touch of humor in all the right places, and wellwritten, with a killer "voice". Fanfiction sites like this are mostly about serving up the sex, so no one focuses on the other aspects, like the actual writing and set up. But you did. Thank you for a thoroughly enjoyable read.