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for Jinx

by notsocute

person J42
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Marcus is such a mental chatterbox, it's hilarious. Definitely looking forward to the tete-a-tete! Thanks for the update... Looking forward to the next! ;-)
person kiix
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
0_o *blink blink* run away. Run away! Too late. You should have listened.

More soon, please
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soo Exciting!!! The story gonna get more exciting...How Marcus will manage his confuse thinking? and What's the next step for Julian to do with him? So much more interesting. But I think have something missing in this chapter about the mission that Marcus accept to keep eyes for the drug gang... So waiting to read more. Always support you.
person Anon
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your story is sooooooo great ! Marcus must have to kick some asses.

Update as soon as you can ! I (and i'm not the only one if i believe the other reviews) CAN'T WAIT !!
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, I love the story so much, hope you will update soon, puppy eyes
person tdorian
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow.I read it all at once yesterday and it left me breathless;it's so good ! Your characters are so well written, the plot is wicked.Great work;Update soon !!!
person tdorian
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
je viens de voir sur ton profil que tu es français(e...?) Ton travail est d'autant plus impressionant ! bravo.Aïda
person J42
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love how animated you are. Your energy and passion for the characters really come through -- Marcus is sooo chatty, and Julian is a wicked tease. And now we learn more about why Julian isn't just a simple restaurant owner, and what the tattoo might be on Marcus' face. And yearn for the next chapter even more... because clearly, Julian is also club Velvet's owner? ;-) And we thank you for your efforts and are definitely looking forward to the next update! Soon, please? :-)
person miles
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter !
So, Julian is the Sire ? He's really "le vilain de l'histoire" ?
Franchement, j'adore l'interaction des deux principaux personnages...
La façon dont J poursuit M pour le mettre dans son lit ! LOL
Bon, il est quand même un peu violent, mais ça va avec la personnalité d'un type du milieu...
Vraiment, good job !
Je sais que tu viens juste de rajouter le dernier chapitre, mais bon, j'espère le suivant dans pas trop longtemps ^^...
Courage à toi !
person romanticfae
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wonderful