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Wow, that was so evilly hot. The poor dude, poor Markus. He's so in over his head that he's drowning. Awww. And little evil me, enjoying the show =^-^=
I have listed this story among my RR. It's just that good ^^ I really like the fact that Markus doesn’t give up even when he faces defeat. In so many stories, the head character has a lot of bad luck thrown his way, but from one orgasm or a kind caress, they forgive their oppressor because, well, in heart he wasn’t all that bad and he only want’s what’s best for me and I do love him so much even though I just meet him an hour ago. Not to mention that, since the other dude is so hot, how can I not fall before his feet and drool? Rosy, heart-cheeked death sculls made of pink plastic. I hate that… But not your story. Yay! *Throws confetti* I love Marcus. He is just so… perfect for his role. And Evans is a cruel bastard with just enough few hints that he actually might have a heart hidden away in some far forgotten room… somewhere.

In other words… nice story ;P

yeah,that was really hot and so intense...awesome.
I love Julian,maybe only because I´m not Marcus...hihi.
He is such a cruel bastard,it`s like watching a playfull cat and a tiny mouse,ähm
except for the sex stuff...
And poor Marcus,so unwilling yet so excited.I bet he will try to escape soon!
Can`t wait to read more,Jules

Excellent!!!! Applause. Take your time if you are going to offer up goodies like this last chapter.

Thank you for the wonderful read!!

Kiix

*couine* *couine*
Presque quinze jours sans update...
Je sais, j'abuse ! C'est pas si long... But... *soupir*
Nouveau chapitre me manque.....................

haha he should have seen it coming. ^^but I love the new chapter!! please update soon!!!

Oh, he's in trouble now! I wish I had more time, but I loved this chapter!

Ah, honestly, I've got a few complaints. They're not important though and the only reason I logged in was because I had to comment on this "green lemon". Sure it's not a lime?

Okay, well I like your last seven 8 chapters. The two chapter prologue is a bit off-putting, especially the extremely convincing het in the first chapter. I don't want to seem heterophobic, but whatever. I'm actually convinced that this guy can live a happy straight life in the first chapter. Such a shame. His anal self made me put him into the same personality category as House. I just think that that part could have been a bit shorter, cutting those two chapters into just one. It's TMI for a flash forward I think. But w/e, I'm past that now. And I just have to say


KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!! I louuuuuve YOur STory Sooo MUch!!!!.
Please UPdate!!!

thank you for the next chapter, oh markus, you are in deep shit, the update was absolutely great, sending you virtual cookies and puppy eyes

Julian est finalement assez patient...plus que moi en tout cas ! LOL J'adore son petit jeu de chat et la souris.Malgré tout son charme on n'oublie jamais à quel point il est dangereux,manipulateur.Il est vraiment un personnage fascinant.j'attends tes nouveaux chapitres chaque semaine avec une grande impatience ! Aida

I loved this chapter! The contrast between how safe he feels in Julian's arms and how safe he isn't was adorable. I have complete sympathy for the turmoil he has about giving in and being tossed aside afterward.

Great job :)