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by notsocute

person tdorian
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH.MY.GOD. or devil if you prefer ! LOL An update ,yayyyyy !!! I've missed this and Marcus.This chapter was freaking hot but I cannot wait for the next one ! I stil have the first chapter clear in my head and I wonder what happened, why Marcus left a,d for a woman at that !
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! When I saw you had updated, I reread it from the beginning to refresh myself about it cuz i remembered that I had enjoyed it alot, and although you said you were not sure about the last chapter, I thought the last chap was as good as ever. You are so good at characterization, I love that Marcus is so certain that he is right, and he is not giving in to Julian's advances. Although I think its cute that Julian seems to be genuinly loving Marcus now, he just dosent know how to be gentle about it yet, he's such an alpha gorilla that crashes into whatever he wants lol. It seems like he has alot of restrained violence, so we are never sure how he's gonna treat poor Marcus. But I do hope Marcus wins in the end! Also, as a sidenote, I like that you made Julian blonde and Marcus black haired......so often Tops are brunette, its just a nice change that I appreciated :-)
person kristina
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Grrr! I just left the above review (the one w/ the alpha gorilla comment hehe) and I forgot to give myself a nickname here in case you want to write me a quick response. Anyway, call me kristina lol
person clovermax
schedule January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Julius seems to know exactly what to do to play Marcus. Do they really stand a chance to be togetheror is Julius just manipulating Marcus for his own fun Thank you for updating this is avery enjoyable fiction.
person kiix
schedule January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! I like the inner dialogue our little uke-in-training is going through. Your writing is worth the wait. I'm glad I'm on your mailing list.

Update when you can.
person lucmaria
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
luctsubasa@yahoo.co.id

jinx aff

love your story keep me inform when your updated

take care.
person wynja
schedule November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I'm SO glad this story isen't dead! Please add me to the mailing-list so I don't miss the update! : wynja_bane@hotmail.com
person J42
schedule November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. Sorry to hear about your personal trials - take your time to do what you need. We're looking forward to your update and will be here for you again when you're ready. Take care!
person miles
schedule November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Franchement, merci d'avoir pris la peine d'écrire cette petite note.
La vie n'est pas façile parfois !
Courage à toi !
person Avernion
schedule November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The e-mails fichy@live.se :3 I think this story rocks. Sorry to hear about your parents. Those things are never fun and very energy consuming for everybody. I hope life gives you a very big hug very soon :3