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awesome fic. i'm a lurker and it is rare that something this good comes along and pulls me from lurking to actually say something. This is different from many i have read in a long time. a breath of fresh air quite frankly when compared to some of the other things people put up and consider writing, a beta reader could help tighten up most of the grammar errors but over all you get your points across and your style is refreshing to read. keep up the good work!!

Thank you for the update. I have been waiting for so long for it. I love this story. and this chapter was great.

I read a review which said they were 'together' during 6 months. So today I checked. And its is true.
Drame! All my theories are wrong! So now I am back at guessing!
And by rereading the first chapter I remarqued that how Julian is (and how Marcus see him) is different of how he seems to be during the last chapter. So even more guessing!
It will allow me to be patient until the next update!

Bon courage pour tout et a bientot!

Bye
M

yay. welcome back! GREAT UPDATE! "MINE" MUAHAHAHAAH

I read the prologue again and it just made me even more curious why Marcus ran away. He seemed to be a teeny-tiny bit interested in having a relationship with Julian in the last chapter. Then there's the fact that he spent around half a year with the man before he ran away. Julian even seemed like he could have been capable of being a caring lover given some time. I can't wait to find out exactly what the hell happened between them?

thank's to let me know you are updating jinx....
hehehe...i think markus will not have a peacefull week with that kind of message...snicker...snicker...
hope u will not take to long for the next updated.

OMG ! Kyaaaaa ! Je rentre du taf et... surprise !! An update !! So happy !
And it was worth waiting !!
Les auteurs sont rarement satisfait de leur travail mais je trouve ce nouveau chapitre excellent !
J'aime comment tu fais apparaitre Julian vulnérable à certains moments tout en le laissant maitriser la situation ^^
Il y a toujours le même humour que dans les autres chapitres XDD and I love it !
Une seule remarque ; Je trouve la première partie, avec la longue réflexion de Marcus, un peu longue...
Mais bon, j'étais pressée d'arriver à la bataille verbale entre les deux !! :P

Marcus va avoir une semaine pour changer d'avis et se trouver des excuses pour revenir sur ce qui a été dit !
Julian lui a mis une tonne de pression avec sa dernière remarque ^^
I can't wait for more... Comme d'habitude *sigh*

thank you so much for the great update

Huh, I did not expect this chapter! I'm now all for Julian though it'll be interesting to see how he connects to the Phoenix group. Is that what's going to set Marcus off running? I'm definantly curious to see! Anyway, this is seriously aweome. The moments of submission are especially cute on Marcus' part and Julian's entire attitude is seriously hot! Can't wait to read more!

J'ai énormément aimé ce chapitre. Encore plus que les autres, ce que j'aurais pas cru possible! J'ai bien aimé leur conversation, ils en avaient grand besoin! Et Julian apparait plus humain et ça rend las choses encore plus intéressantes!
J'ai passé la nuit (enfin pas toute, qd même) et ma journée de travail à me demander quand comment, pourquoi il allait s'enfuir.(forcément j'ai vu que tu as mis à jour au moment ou j'allais me coucher : l'effort pr éteindre mon PC fut surhumain!).
Enfin, après ce chapitre, je crois avoir une idée : Ai je tord de supposer que qd Julian reviendra, Marcus se sera envolé, terrorisé par la tentation de ceder (et la dernière phrase de Julian)?
J'imagine que je le saurais au prochain chapitre! (ghaa! le mot attendre me donne des bouton!=
Bye!
M