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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is good so far. I thought it had its comedic moments. I noticed the spelling errors but they were not distracting. I really hope you will keep going with this.
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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hello
your story is absolutely great, I love it. English is not my native language too, but your skills are amazing. I can´t wait for the next chapter
your story is absolutely great, I love it. English is not my native language too, but your skills are amazing. I can´t wait for the next chapter
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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, great start. i can't wait for more!
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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the it so far and I'm sure that it will get better ^^.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh dear, just read all 4 chapters at a go and really hoping for more soon. this can't stop here... what happens next, please? really love manic semes and audacious ukes. thanks for your efforts!
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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story :D
i like the plot alot!
but Even sounds like SUCH a dick!!
haha.
poor Marcus :((
i like the plot alot!
but Even sounds like SUCH a dick!!
haha.
poor Marcus :((
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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my
waiting for more
waiting for more