schedule
December 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really liked this story! I love supernatural stories =) But I was a little bit confused at the end. What ended up happening with Aziral and Dillon? Did Dillion kill him or something?
schedule
August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So beautiful and so sad. Both Aziral and Dillon were so wonderfully described. They really came alive. An amazing read.
schedule
April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well then... that ending... that was.. phooey... I hate endings like that... but!
Fantastically written work. It caught and held my attention. There were a few minor mistakes, but not enough to throw me off.
Thanks so much for writing and sharing your work!!!!
Fantastically written work. It caught and held my attention. There were a few minor mistakes, but not enough to throw me off.
Thanks so much for writing and sharing your work!!!!
schedule
April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Waah! This chapter brought tears to my eyes. Is this the end for Dillon and Aziral? My heart is broken. I hope Aziral will find some happiness.
schedule
April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I went to look at the artwork for this story. So beautiful it broke my heart even more. I had trouble leaving a comment in your guestbook though.
schedule
April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story almost broke my heart. I could even hear shattering sounds. It didn't turn out like I thought, so it surpriced me greatly. Completely bitter sweet story. Thank you for writing it.
schedule
April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this story! I wish the ending had been a little happier though. I feel so sad that Dillon was injured and then never the same. I was hoping he was strong minded enough to retain the essence of who he was before the change.
Thanks for the story!
Thanks for the story!
schedule
April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First off, damn this is good. Ripped through four chapters and went to click next and there wasn't one. If you heard an 'aaawwwww' that was me.
This needs more hits. It deserves more hits. The characters are 'real' and complex. Dillon's rage issues just make him more believable. Aziral...black wings...what is the significance? It must be important because of the title. I'll ponder while waiting for you to up date.
Soon k?
Kiix
This needs more hits. It deserves more hits. The characters are 'real' and complex. Dillon's rage issues just make him more believable. Aziral...black wings...what is the significance? It must be important because of the title. I'll ponder while waiting for you to up date.
Soon k?
Kiix
schedule
April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lord, I LOVE this story. Its *freaking* brilliant. Vampire-stories are usually hot, but DAMN! I need to know more. You'll give us more, won't you? Right? Right?
schedule
April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am very eager to find out what it is in Dillon's past that makes him such a wildcat and what his tie with Aziral is. I understand Brian's jealousy but I wonder why Steven puts up with it and even supports his bad behavior. Time for Aziral to put them in their place. I hope Dillon is not too damaged. Great chapter. Looking forward to the next update.