rate_review Reviews

Poor Yuan =(
He needs a hug =0
AND ASURA NEEDS A HOT POKER UP THE ASS DAMNIT!
The man's a bitch!

Nice chapter. I wish I could persuade the General to share my bed too. I am eager to see what happens next.

I also think that your summary does a very good job of hinting about what will happen in the story. Anyone who reads it should have some idea of what to expect. Your story is great.

OOHH! I sense DRAMA!! And I can't wait for the threesome love. I hope you update agaon soon :D

Poor Yuen, he won't have a problem for long though I imagine.

If I could squeal in this,I would! OMG- I love this story. Plz, plz, plz continue!^^

Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com

I liked the characters of Yuan and Senel and the setting of the story, the scenery, their hot coupling and sweet words of love, but totally hated the ending. Cute Yuan cames out as a slut, getting aroused after being tortured and having the old man he was supposedly guarding killed... He should have been feeling remorseful and in pain, not aroused and silently wishing his man won't caught him cheating with the general he just met. I'm really sorry, when I dislike something on a story I usually let it pass and keep on reading (or stop and follow onto the next one) but I loved Yuan and Senel as a couple, and it made me sad to learn Yuan's affections will be going elsewhere :( .

Poor Senel.
I can't wait to read more of this story.
Do I predict a love triangle in the future?

I'm actually like this a whole lot
-Contented smile-