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I don't know how I missed the last update but I was happy to find two new chapters. Love the spanking of Cecil and the tying up of Yuan. I love this trio. They work so well together and as always Senel is so hot. Cecil and Yuan are gentle and loving and Senel makes everything sizzle. I see now that Asura is motivated by his love for the evil but super sexy Raven. I feel sorry for Asura because Raven is definitely using him. I am eager to see what happens next and if Raven and Yuan have another encounter.

God, you update so fast! It feels like just yesterday I was reading chapter 4. Anyways, chapter 4&5 were as hot as ever. There's just something really sexy about Senel topping Cecil. Maybe its the rank, dunno. Damn hot.

No, I like our evil melodramatic villian let's see how evil he can be first before his downfall:)

Daaamn!!! That was sweet! :D
I didn´t understand what you meant, that the threesome part was hard to write? Well maybe it was, but it was awesome!!! there wasn´t even a hint of a feeling that it would´ve been forced, not at all!
Okay, so you have most likely decideed how the story goes, so there won´t be any changes, no matter how much the fans plead.
But I must try at least... PLEASE DON`T KILL SENEL!!!
Or if you do, then please at least try to come up with a similar story with three men having a realitionship with each other.
There is just so few of good threesome pairings in aff. Now that I think about it I can´t recall any... Sure there are stories where guys are having groupsex, but those stories are mostly just porn and they are oneshots and I wouldn´t call it an actual threesome pairings if the one main cahacter is changing partners between ten different men. I was so thrilled when I found this story!!! Three different characters which complete each other. Just think about how great, fun and epic story you could make with these three and of their adwentures!!!
Okay, now I am rambling, but no matter how the story continues, I at least hopefully planted a fruitfull idea, which would see the daylight by your imagination!

Chapter 4 was super awesome. You did a very good job of writing your threesome. I think Senel was enjoying himself too much directing the whole show. LOL! I love Asura's evilness too. Showing Asura peeping at the end was just hilarious. I think I want to take Senel home with me. He is so hot!

Soooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooooooood. I love your stories so much! Normally, I'm not a fan of threesome couple stories because I get kind of possessive over two chars. :( But in this case I don't really care~ Because it's sooooo goooood. UPDATE SOON!

Great chapter. I thought the scene with Yuan and the bandits was embarassing for him but not too traumatic. I can't wait to read more.

WOW! So was not expecting that. The Emperor's son. I can't wait to see where this goes :D

Sorry, I'm a bit of a stickler about grammar.
Homophones don't appear to be your friend.
Keep watch for the difference between "Your" and "You're" and "Hear" and "Here"
Spell check doesn't get that kind of thing- you'd have to do it by hand.

Other than that, I like it so far.

Ah so a threesome?
I am one to more like the romance mixed in with the hardcore. So much conflict and self pity/hate can only go on for so long
until It gets too much for me. I hope you have a good balance.