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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I have never been a fan of the real story, but I like it so far! Continue please
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good so far. I'd like to see you continue.
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wish the chapters were a little longer, but I guess the swift updates make up for that. Such an interesting story and it's so cute at the same time. And yet very gritty. I think Lewis Carol himself would like this!
And hurrah for the Cheshire Cat! I love him to bits. And the Hatter as well, even if Leo is a dick. So far.
And hurrah for the Cheshire Cat! I love him to bits. And the Hatter as well, even if Leo is a dick. So far.
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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oddly interesting, you have my attention. I was wondering if you could space your paragraphs a little bit and could the next chapter be longer(thats just me wanting to read more of the story LOL) Good premise though.
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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful, no pun intended. Alice In Wonderland is the most beautiful piece of literature ever to grace this earth, and this is doing a fine job of giving the story a modern and unique touch. I'm definitely in love with this. I can't wait to see the Cheshire Cat! Update soon, yeah?
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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now I'm hooked!
I was expecting one of those cheesy high school fics and definitely not this! I really can't wait to read more!
I was expecting one of those cheesy high school fics and definitely not this! I really can't wait to read more!