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June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love it
Nique you crazy bicth
Nique you crazy bicth
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May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was fun to read. I like the twist you have taken from Alice in Wonderland and turned it into a gay original! Nice job. The slow build up UST is well done and I am intrigued enough to want to follow this when you update.
Also nice clean writing style; proper sentence and paragraph structure, grammar and spelling all add to the experience of an enjoyable read.
Also I want to thank you for the review you left me for Asexuality...and yes, you may certainly borrow from it and make it into a more normal dialog. I'm actually happy if something I have written sparks more creativity in someone else. So go for it. (ps I'm still tossing up emailing you but I'm a wary canary so I apologise for answering your question here instead of via email. You can msg me at http://hsbs.livejournal.com/ or preferably at http://hsbs.deviantart.com/ )
It would also be great when you update Alice if you could msg me so I know when I can come back for more. I dont log into AFF regularly.
Hope to hear from you
xxGarfield
Also nice clean writing style; proper sentence and paragraph structure, grammar and spelling all add to the experience of an enjoyable read.
Also I want to thank you for the review you left me for Asexuality...and yes, you may certainly borrow from it and make it into a more normal dialog. I'm actually happy if something I have written sparks more creativity in someone else. So go for it. (ps I'm still tossing up emailing you but I'm a wary canary so I apologise for answering your question here instead of via email. You can msg me at http://hsbs.livejournal.com/ or preferably at http://hsbs.deviantart.com/ )
It would also be great when you update Alice if you could msg me so I know when I can come back for more. I dont log into AFF regularly.
Hope to hear from you
xxGarfield
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
::giggles::
Wonderful...
Wonderful...
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that's so adorable! They really are so cute together ^_^ I love how Alice just ate the flowers, ha ha ha :P And stole the pipe from the caterpiller - much more fun than the Disney Alice, ha ha. Please keep up the good work! ^_^
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that last part was cute! And you added in more stuff. Yay! I liked this chapter, though; it was amusing. They're bonding! Well, for now. Who knows what they'll be like when they're not high...
Sorry I wasn't around to beta it in its entirety; I disappear from time to time.
Sorry I wasn't around to beta it in its entirety; I disappear from time to time.
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is interesting so far... I wonder what happens to the next chapter!
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March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw. That chapter was cute.
And I'm very flattered that you read my stories, and like them! Since you said you wanted a beta and someone to chuck ideas at, I'm volunteering if you want!
You can contact me at moshroom7@gmail.com
And I'm very flattered that you read my stories, and like them! Since you said you wanted a beta and someone to chuck ideas at, I'm volunteering if you want!
You can contact me at moshroom7@gmail.com
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March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
He he he! ^_^ Aww, Leo's so cute inside his head. And I love how grumpy Alice is XD Please keep up the good work! ^_^
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March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, this is one of the most creative stories I've read in while!!! I love it!! Your characters are all so funny and cuddly ol. Thanks for sharing, and I can't wait to read your next chapter. 8D
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March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Its so adorable! I can't figure out if I like Leo or Alice more... but I know I like thinking about them together already!
Need more soon please!
Need more soon please!