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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving the hell out of this so far. Not enough punk stories to go around on this site. I hope a Mohawk is thrown in somewhere; I love boys with Mohawks. XD. Anyway, this is very well done. A great view of the scene and settings, and of course the characters are interesting, very realistic and gritty.
I can't wait to see more of this, so I'll be keeping an eye out for future updates.
I can't wait to see more of this, so I'll be keeping an eye out for future updates.
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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great job! good writing style and interesting characters. made me laugh and made me feel kind of sad. i don't usually review but i think your story deserves a lot more reviews and ratings than you've gotten so far. it's a good thing you posted on other sites as well, hope they show more appreciation ;)
anyway, i hope you keep writing, i for one am really looking forward to a next chaper!
anyway, i hope you keep writing, i for one am really looking forward to a next chaper!
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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww Eli is adorable lol, It sucks that he's still closeted because of certain reasons but atleast he isn't confused....I'm liking it so far!