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March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. I check back every day to see if it has been updated. I know I have not reviewed yet, but that doesn't make me any less eager to see a chapter three (and/or more?)
Please, Please continue.
Please, Please continue.
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Eli. I understand how he feels. But I think if his gaydar wasn't broken, he might realise Adrian is actually interested in him. Or at least it seems that way; the guy's all over him at every chance. Interesting twist that he and Carl are cousins... I guess sexy runs in that gene pool. I'm definitely looking forward to more. I love this story a lot.
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 2
This is pretty good :) Nice start and the fic is written in a very clear language. Very smooth writing style. I'll be reading this one to see where you'll take it :D
This is pretty good :) Nice start and the fic is written in a very clear language. Very smooth writing style. I'll be reading this one to see where you'll take it :D
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Henry Rollins. I love Black Flag. I love Pansy Division. I love this story. I love you.
No, seriously. And I haven't even read second chapter all the way yet.
No, seriously. And I haven't even read second chapter all the way yet.
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have a shirt that says FAG on it. Actually, it says 'The Flaming Lips' but everything except the F-A-G is printed extremely small and it has Wayne Coyne with alien antennae on the front. I wear it primarily to the supermarket because I get the most looks from it.
I finally got to finish this. I like living in Eli's head for a while, so update soon.
I finally got to finish this. I like living in Eli's head for a while, so update soon.
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like Adrian, he seems like a good enough guy..=[
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is written in a startlingly artistic style. It feels like the diary of a guy I knew in high school, so reading it is sort of a voyueristic sort of feeling. xD
Totally diggin' it so far, though!
Totally diggin' it so far, though!
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so damn good!! The best I`ve read for a long time here. Kind of different and I totally like the setting in the punk scene.
I was laughing so hard about that sentence how easy it is, to hate bands like good charlotte or blink 182, you are soo right!! (Although I must admit, I`m not a punk but more an indie-girl with an occasional liking for punk and hardcore). Please write more and please do it fast! I want to read so much more about this!!
*mandatory Excuse for horrible english grammar*
Ciao,
Mica
I was laughing so hard about that sentence how easy it is, to hate bands like good charlotte or blink 182, you are soo right!! (Although I must admit, I`m not a punk but more an indie-girl with an occasional liking for punk and hardcore). Please write more and please do it fast! I want to read so much more about this!!
*mandatory Excuse for horrible english grammar*
Ciao,
Mica
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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far. Very interested to see how you develop Eli.
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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would love it if you would continue this story. It's sounds very interesting. Eli is very funny and also adorable.