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I am so happy to see an update to this story. The story is coming along very nicely and the tension is high. I am pretty sure that Adrian is deliberately stealing Eli from Carl -especially if he knew that Carl loved Eli. What kind of cousin would do that? Why didn't he tell Eli before that Carl was in love with him? So my heart is breaking for Carl. Perhaps Eli will have to see how things go now that he knows that Carl has been in love with him all this time. I just hope he doesn't sleep with Adrian because I am convinced that Adrian is a jerk. I am sad because Eli and Carl have both been suffering from unrequited love all this time.

I did a dorky, embarrassing dance when this updated. And it was worth the momentary humiliation, because this chapter was phenomenal. It's so interesting the way you've fleshed out these characters. They're like cats I'd kick it with. Somehow I don't think it's going to be over between Eli and Carl... Or maybe that's just wishful thinking on my part. I like Adrian, don't get me wrong but I like Carl, too! What a situation. I must once again commend you on how realistic you're pacing Eli's coming to terms with his sexuality, but at the same time you're not dragging it out and making it arduous. Looking forward to your next update; this is definitely one of the shiniest gems I've found on AFF.

OMG, what an amazing story! I so love Eli, Adrian too, And of course Carl. But, during their talk, why didn't Eli ask Carl why he was always dating girls and why HE never showed any interest. God, that's so sad; they were both pining for one another and didn't even know it. I hope it works out w/Adrian, tho; he seems like he's really good for Eli. I also hope you continue w/this story; I was SO freakin' happy to see you finally updated!!!!

I'm glad to see that you updated this. It's such a great story, it would be a shame if it was just left unfinished. Can't wait to see what else happens!

OMGG Julian!!!!!! I am so fucking excited you updated this!!!!! I thought you had forgotten this awesome, wonderful story. I didn't even read the last chapter yet; I gotta go and reread the other chapters. I just wanted to say thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!

this story is amazing! i hope you put more up soon. :D

i get the feelin that Carl is in love with Eli, and maybe Adrian isnt all hes crack up to be, could be wrong thou.....

Fabulous story! Eli is such a sweet, sweet mess. I love the interaction with his sister. Thanks for sharing your talent.

I am in love with your story. Parts of it make my heart hurt because it is so true to life. Especially in chapter 1 when Eli says he knows his friends will ditch him if they knew he was gay. I just hope that Eli will not forget about Carl now that he has a boyfriend. He should remember that Carl is his best friend even if Carl doesn't like the new relationship. I also love Abby. Eli has created his own five year old "fag hag" already. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good writig.

The main reason I like this story is because it reminds me of my life on so many different levels. And it isn't just Eli, but all the guys. figures I would identify with a bunch of male punks. It's the small details. Like the dyed black hair with red roots (except I had a mohawk), the vinyl and the old crowd with the high quality pot and great stories. It's a tad on the cliche side, but I am very willing to overlook this because you know how to write. I look forward to your next installment.

All I can say that Carl needs to hurry up and get in there before he looses his chance with Eli.