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by EvilGenius

person DaniD
schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah..I'm loving this story!! :) Ok..Andy is without a doubt in complete denial as far as Matt goes. lol It's safe to say he no longer sees her as prey..he's wants her submissive, but something tells me that there is going to be a little problem with that. hehehe Probably the very thing that attracts Matt and possibley the vampire is going to prevent her from being submissive. Power..right? and it seems like there is a lot of it that Andy hasn't even been tapped into yet.

This is getting edge of your seat, lets have some popcorn good! Can't wait for more :)
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh silly me. Well i am still enjoying. even more so now that i know what going on with the characters. Can wait to see who the good guy will turn out to be. Matt the werewolf with prey/mate issues or mystrious vampire who doesn't ask you first before he takes a bit. I'm voting werewolf. I think andy just has to get on his protective side and then life will be much easier. So Andy is a witch right any power?
thanks for correcting me and this new chapter
person Monddame
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, keep going! Keep going!!!
::promises to write a better review for the next chapter::
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So far the story has been very intriguing. I'm wondering what the were Matt's role is, seems very possessive and kinda psycho too. Perhaps she's seen as the omega in school? Or maybe, the werewolves and vampires are like sworn enemies?

I don't really know where the story is heading to now that you've added a gorgeous vampire, but it looks to be interesting. I'll be looking forward to the next update.
person DaniD
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Found this...and I have to say only a few chapters in, I'm hooked! I see a bit of a mystery unfolding as far as Matt's behavior goes. Is Matt's anger fueled by a feeling of possesivenes? Who is the mystery vampire?? So many questions..and I can't wait to see how this all unfolds! Great update :)
person angelmay
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good work,I'm looking forward to more.
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow great story so far. Fast moving chapter but still detailed. love all the cliffhangers. One little thing. Isn't Andy a guy? I was just wondering cause he was called miss collins in the last chapter twice.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
person angelmay
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it!