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why why did you have to end it there? I have been waiting so patiently for the next chapter AND YOU END IT LIKE THAT?! *sobs* oh please please please update as soon as you can and please *gets on hands and knees* make the next chapter longer. I'M BEGGING YOU! Ja Mata Misawo

Okay I do hate Matt. He's an ass of the first class. And the mysterious vamp guy what's his deal? I guess all will reveal in time, huh? Still, I really do hate Matt, just as much as Andy does.

Gee, where's bad ass Matt when he's needed? Interesting development with the voices, I'm thinking like old witches? maybe hags? They did call her sister, or maybe called each other sister.

Very happy the vamp is finally back, perhaps some revelations next update?

Can't wait to see the next development.

Oh and the whole thing with Matt and the bite nice way of continuing with the speculation of Andy being his mate! Matt definitely has the possessive alpha male routine down.

Just wanted to let you know that I really like your story. So much so that I actually logged in, a rarity for me, just to let you know. You've left lots of interesting questions that need to be answered. Is she really attracted to either of her "suitors"? Will she be able to break the shield and get away? Does she really want to? Will either of the men involved realize that there is only just so much one girl can take? Can't wait to find out.

Hi. last two chapters definitely gave more insight into the workings of the school. I'm waiting to see the vampire again though...

Sorry I did not review the last chapter, it's right before Spring Break so of course 3 of my professors decided to have a midterm this week. It's totally draining all my brain cells. it was nice to take a break and find not just one but two new chapters!

I'll check back at the end of the week, keep up the excellent work.

ooo..Matt doesn't know what he has started does he?? Andy is on a mission..and what the hell has he got planned for her Fri, btw? LOL Great update :)

This Matt guy is the most infuriating character. I would just like to know, is he acting like an ass because he likes her or he likes torturing her because he just really, really gets on my nerves. I'm hoping she can come up with some kind of potion, spell, magic or something to get back at him for treating her the way he does. I mean if he does like her, he should ease up, geesh! Its not sexy or appealing in any kind of way what he's doing. Okay, my rant is somewhat over, I'll keep the rest of my dislike of Matt to myself and what about the vampire guy that bit her? Does he have a name and will he reappear?

The multiple relationships you are cultivating for Andy are very well crafted. I can't wait to see how she reacts to Matt in the future. Usually in stories like this it is quite easy to see where the author is leading you, but since Andy doesn't seem to particularly enjoy any specific male company at the moment, I feel all I can do is guess. So, congratulations on that. :)
Sorry this isn't more helpful/coherent. I supposed I shouldn't stay up until all hours of the morning and then expect to be eloquent in reviews. ;)

Love it! Uppdate soon

Hmm, still not too clear on what is going on with Matt but I'm sure that will develop as the story unfolds. So were those girls like the female pack leaders? Because Andy was in the freshman's restrooms, does that mean even the younger kids are higher on the chain than her?

Continue writing the story looks very promising Don't worry too much about the length of the chapters as long as the flow of the story is what you want it to be.