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by EvilGenius

person DaniD
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooo...Andy bites back. Nice to see her as the predator rather than the prey for once.

I really liked this chapter and somehow, I think Matt enjoyed the show.

Uh oh..If Andy isn't careful she's gonna get caught up between a vamp and a were, will she be able to survive it?
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
These two last chapters had me reaching for something to grasp! We need more, want more! I think Matt definitely likes that Andy is finally showing some spine, the alpha is choosing his mate wisely. You know I was rooting for the vamp but I think you may be switching teams...
person Monddame
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"I contemplated the fact that it might just be decaying at a rapid rate on my tray."
Hahaha!! I can just imagine. Gross. The school I did my undergrad at served chicken nuggets in the dining hall ALL the time. haha
I love the sparkling energy ball exchange. For a minute I was like, suddenly she can curse people? Oh... haha very nice. :)
person MnMs
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Humans? I thought that the barrier around the mountain kept all of the "supernatural critters" in, and regular people out. I can see the triangle developing here, but I'm not sure what all of the connections are yet. Is she Matts mate? Wasn't the sexy vampire supposed to be with Daisy instead? Who or what are the voices, and are the ones in the bathroom and the ones in the cave the same? What exactly did she do to Matts car? Update soon.
person cbarkins
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry still not feeling the Matt love. But I am very curious about the vamp and what kind of game he's up to besides maybe to get under Matt's skin and Andy's just a pawn in this game. JMO
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*squeals and dances around in happiness* I loved it, I loved it. Man oh man even the ending was wicked, I loved what she did to the humans. lol. But Matt was kind of creepy. lol. I can't wait till the next chapter, I am enjoying this story so much. Keep up the good work. Ja Mata Misawo
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
.......she is so not going to do what I think she is planning is she?! OMG. lol. If she does she better run like hell....though that probably wouldn't help the situation and she might get tackled by him...rather plainful *imagines it in my head*. Well Anyways, IT WAS AN AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!!! I am loving you story so much that everyday I check to see if you updated. lol. Keep up the good work and please STOP ENDING THE CHAPTERS IN A CLIFFY ITS EVIL!. Ja Mata Misawo
person LAMBM
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

The last two chapters were very interesting and
I can’t wait to see what happens between Andy and Matt…

Keep up the good work...
person DaniD
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohh..wow...she is going to piss Matt off! lol That would truly suck if she does what I think she is going to do..birds are just nasty animals. lol The big question, what is up with the dream about Matt..am I imagining it, or was he actually being loving in that dream? The vampire..I smell Trouble with a capitol T.

Last two chapter were great updates!
person Monddame
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Creepy cave!
Random side note: I knew a guy who drove a Nova in high school. So, I don't know what color you think of it being (maybe you've mentioned it), but it's always pale yellow in my mind! :P
I still can't figure out what is going on (not in a bad, I'm confused kind of way, but a good, this isn't obvious kind of way). Hurrah!
Forced servitude: that really is the worst punishment. Half of me hopes that Andy can really just run away (the other half tells that other stupid half-girl to shut up, b/c if she does the story won't be the same). Keep up the good work!