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by EvilGenius

person Anon
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
unacceptable... you must write now... I want more its been far too long... if I must bribe you I will... give the the address to mail the cookies or the place to send my undying worships and it will be done... if you post...
Now for the actual review portion of the review... Love it... well written well thought well put together... fluid story line... believable players and amazing pacing just not enough posting if you need a beta I'm available
schedule November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow! I'm lovin Matt and Andrea they have some chemistry together. Now if she would only get over her fear!
person DHM
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is great, please update soon!
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really want her to just run away but I know there has to be a breaking point.
loving it!
person Monddame
schedule September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Saliva dripping onto her shoulder: poignantly gross.
I wonder how that will work out: if Matt wants her to be his mate or whatever. Will she have to become a were too? I'm interested to see how this plays out.
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The story did need to take a turn but did you have o include Becca groping Matt? yuck!

I've definitely jumped onto the Matt bandwagon now. It will be very interesting to read about Andy and Matt's next meeting to see his reaction to the whole thing.

Glad to see the update. :)
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm still rooting for Matt.
person Jenn
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting story. I like the interplay between Andy and Matt, though I'd like to know a little more about him and his character. Anyway, I'm looking forward to your next update!
person MnMs
schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so she does like Matt and Nicholas. Even if she can't admit it to herself yet. What exactly is she to them? Going by most werewolf stories, Matt has marked her, but then where does Becca fit in? Nicholas has bitten her too, so does that mean that she's marked by him as well? My goodness her love life is messy! Update soon.
person johnny
schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I NEED MOAR!!!! By the way are you on fictionpress.com????