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by EvilGenius

person xox_girl
schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS
im dying
schedule January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mmm... munchies. Those vampiric ho's. Thanks so much for the update; it totally made my night. I should really check for them more consistently.

Cheers!
person Monddame
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
No dear author, YOU are the tease. :P
I knew at some point she'd end up going back to the vampire, though I wasn't sure how you'd work that out. But, bravo, it made perfect, logical sense! Nicely done.
Can't wait for more!
person Bee
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god, I am sooooooo in love with your story. I love your character Andy. She is strong and interesting. I like the fact that she is facing adversity and becoming stronger for it. It appears she is a much stronger witch then anyone gives her credit for and maybe these "sisters" are the ones that are going to help unlock her power. I think the vampire senses her strength and wants her for himself. I love Matt too, yes he is a jerk and she hates him (which I think is perfect) but I really think he is in love with her, I mean doesn't a bite signify that he regards her as his mate? hmm.... and I kind of like the vampire too because he provides an escape for her and a challenge for Matt. Oh my god, Matt is going to freak out when he finds his bite gone and the vampires' bite again. And I love that the vampire was all smug because he was the first male to touch her like that. God these Vamps and Weres are so possessive! hahaha. I love it! Maybe Matt is going to sense that she is with the vamp through his bite and is going to be heading in her direction for a confrontation perhaps?? I think it's good that she stopped the vampire before it went to far, it doesn't seem like she is ready and secretly I am rooting for Matt. hahaha.
Maybe I am looking into this more then I should but I kind of found it funny that Chris called Andy "princess" it's like he knows she is going to be the alpha's mate or something. And I think if Matt gives her hell for the vampire, she should give him hell for Becca, but I guess Becca kind of saved her otherwise she would have been mated before she was ready.
Ok I loveeeeee this story. Can you tell by my long comments? hahaha. Please please pretty please update soon!!!
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story i wish you would finish it
person Anon
schedule December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
E-mail me with the address to send them... seriously... oh tomorrow is my birthday do I get a birthday chappie... oh and... I loved that last bit... Her realisation that she was doing it to get at matt not because she wanted to... and he was all like... dammit... blue balls
person MnMs
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, so Andrea went to the vampire just to piss Matt off? What exactly is Matt and Beccas relationship? What exactly is Matt and Andreas relationship? Can't wait to read more.
person reckless_fire
schedule December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So awesome! I can't wait to see what comes next and I am so beyond happy that there was a new chapter on Guardian! yay!

Happy Holidays!
person Onihime1
schedule December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must admit, as much as I dislike Matt, it seems to me as if he cares about Andy. Yeah, sure he's bullied the hell out of her, but something tells me that he's protecting her from things getting as bad as they might. I think Andy ran to the vampire because she thinks (for some reason) that he's the lesser of the two evils. It's too bad she doesn't see he's manipulating her just like all vampires do with their prey. Anyway, I'm personally pulling for Matt and Andy to end up together. Please, please, please keep working on this! In my opinion its wonderful. I cannot wait to see what happens next!
person Misawo
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*squeals and dances around* I am so happy that you finally decided to update this story. I was so excited to see the story updated, I was afraid that you had just forgot about it and I was about to burst into tears and cry my little heart out. lol. I like the new chapter and I can't wait for the next one..........is she ever going to escape that town? And when she does whats going to happen? Are they going to hunt her down? Or what?