rate_review Reviews

This is the first story I have ever reviewed on a fan fiction website! I had to with yours because I love Andy. You write her so realistically. Especially with the whole hating Matt but still getting jealous over him thing. It's what I would do lol I love it! Please, please don't ever abandon this story!

YAY! Update! I gotta admit I thought u had abandoned this story. But, very pleased to know u didn't! Very short chapter though and I just gotta say DAMN! this girl has BAD luck!

Yay! An update. I love this story. It's very unique. Also your art is really good. The idea of this story as a comic is great, it would work really well.

My goodness! How much can one girl take? So this was Matts dream? I hope someone gets there in time. I can't waIt for more!

I'm so happy you updated but that interlude was a tease! I need more. What happens next? Is the person who said "hello child" the vampire? And did they hear her screams? Oh my! This is getting so good! I love it. Please update soon!

PLEASE UPDATE

I'm still reading, can't wait to see what happens next. Also, for some reason I'm unable to use that link you posted for review replies. I've registered on the forum, clicked the link that was emailed to me, but am unable to do pretty much anything over there.

Oh this chapter was CREEPY! It gave me shivers when she realized she was being hunted. Not so much that she was being hunted but, that she didn't KNOW what was hunting her. The way you described the hobgoblins attacking her was scary. Imagining it scared me. It reminded me of the pygmy skeleton people in The Mummy Returns....small but, dangerously vicious. Absolutely thrilling chapter! Though when the chapter ended I wanted to throw a B**CH FIT because I NEED to know what's going to happen! I'll keep my fingers cross and hope u update sooner rather than later.

*Fan girl scream* Yes thank you, I was so bored then I realised you had updated, which I so wasn't expecting cause you've never been this speedy before, but I'm so grateful and thank you so much *another fan girls scream, while jumping around*. You need to update you're thing though cause it so wouldn't let me through to see your comments on your reviews, but I love this chapter, I'm so glad Andie didn't die in the car crash, though I'm wondering when Matt is gonna realise she's gone and in danger and drag his sorry werewolf ass to go try and find her *evil grin*, bet he flips when he finds her car crashed, and so close to that lovely vampires home, the same vampire that tried to take her away from him *evil giggle* I so love it when men get feral, Matt's gonna just die when he finds all that blood, it's gonna be beautiful to watch, Thanks for this once again, Bye.

From bad to worse! Now what? Will she manage to save herself somehow? Will someone else save her? Who will it be? Update soon!