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March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sounds cool, but you're right, your grammar does need a little work. I'll fix it up for you if you want. Drop me a line.
Are these guys gonna be like, werewolves or something? Usually a 9 to 1 fight will kill anyone who isn't a superhero. And France is worth... a lot. I'd replace it with a country like Peru, or Greenland. Keeps the joke intact without making it seem unbelievable.
Wishing AFFN had a 'watch story' feature,
Hazel
Are these guys gonna be like, werewolves or something? Usually a 9 to 1 fight will kill anyone who isn't a superhero. And France is worth... a lot. I'd replace it with a country like Peru, or Greenland. Keeps the joke intact without making it seem unbelievable.
Wishing AFFN had a 'watch story' feature,
Hazel