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by PoisonedWine

person kashka
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good to see you writing again :)
Even though I don't like most master/slave stories there's something in your writing that makes it interesting. I will make sure to stay tuned.
And it's good to know Stormy Skies aren't dead :P Will wait for that one too.
Good luck!
person memorietrail
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was good so what happens now?
person cloudyseph
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey, this sounds like it will be really interesting. I'm looking forward to reading more of it!
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Surprisingly good. Not quite sure what the title meant, but I thought to try it out. I think I'll wait just like Alex.
person memorietrail
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow hope theres more soon!
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Definately has potential. I will be waiting to see what happens next.
person J42
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Thanks for sharing this piece. :-)
person anon
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please continue
person tdorian
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope to read more of this soon, it seems promising.
person kristina
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this so far, very interesting story with alot of potential, and well written. I hope you write more!