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Oh man, that drug thing sucks. I wonder what 57 will do when he wakes up! D: Confused, violent?LOL Hehehee, and I'm excited to meet the other two...slaves?

Aww... we still haven't really met 57! I really hope you decide to continue updating this story! T_T

I love the new characters, and sexy times seem to be on the horizon! hehehehe... I love this story so far, please update!!

Oohhh, I really like this! It seems like it will take a slightly different turn than a lot of master/slave stories, in that it has started out really sweet so far! And it was pleasantly surprising to me how well he treats his other slaves! Very cool!

It's brilliant! You got me hooked right away and now I'm eagerly waiting for more. Please don't leave me hanging here. =)

I like this story. I didn't expect Daryl and Zaviour to be slaves too. But they also don't seem to be attracted to their master romantically either.. they seemed more like family. A comfortable one too~ can't wait for the next chapt!

I think you have a really good beginning going!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Loved the first two chapters!! Can not wait to see where you will take this story. Great set up, interesting characters, enough back ground detail to keep it lively, without bogging down the story. Please keep going!!!

I love these types of stories, but I always seem to have trouble finding a good one I can get into. I'm definitely caught on this one though and look forward to updates. I hope you get a chance to write the story to completion. The only critique I have, which is not even that big of a deal, is that I found the nature of the salesman a little off. You clearly portray an order of class (the other worker standing back, the high end room for the clients, etc) yet the guy pour himself a drink and sits beside the client. He just seemed to act too familiar and relaxed - not at all like he was with a company trying to make a sale. I also found it a little strange that they had him wait rather than giving him the option of having the boy shipped to him or coming back later to get the boy. I mean sitting for almost an hour without any entertainment but his thoughts...? But these are just little details and I look forward to reading about the boy fully awake :)

So the title is the slave's number? Question answered! You were very descriptive of 57-38 features. Good Job!

This story is interesting (I like the health-issue spin) but I have to say the re-used character thing is strange. I'm all for archetypes and even cliches (like, say, slave market scenes ;-)) but the same names and exact physical descriptions? It seems unnecessary.