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for 57-38

by PoisonedWine

schedule December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love love love love it! I can't wait for the next chapter.
person vicxn
schedule December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh im liking this! Roll on next chappie xx
person JT.
schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 - No idea how I missed this story. But I absolutely love it. I'm a real sucker for slave stories. Its my achilles' heel if you will. Anyway, the first four chapters were really good. I hope you update relatively soon~
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! I love the changes in POV!
Do continue!
XoXo
person memorietrail
schedule November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh so good more please!
person dutsada
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kenneth, he wasnt even a born slave. But thank God, he's in a good 'family'. Can't wait for the next one! Alex will be home~ wonder whats gonna happen hee~~ update asap please!
person kylee
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. I knew it would be good. I am so excited for Alex to finally meet Kenneth. I feel sorry for Kenneth being stolen from his home. i am eager to hear how that happened as well. I can't wait to read the next chapter of this story. It is very well written with lots of beautiful visual details.
person DekorxAo
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, I wanted it to be longer~!!! loll <3 If I had my way your chapters would be infinite or something. *sighhh*

Anyway, I love Kenneth and all the other characters and I really can't wait for chapter five. I was so happy to see this updated! :) yay!

person smint45
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was really great I absoloutly love the new charas!!! I can't wait for more!!! It's so good to have you back!!! If you next update should be in the next two weeks it is possible that I can't review!!! Please don't think I abandond this sory but I'm on vacation and I don't know if I've got internet acsses !!! See you soon anyway!!!
person DekorxAo
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter, very good! I'm curious about 57-38 and what his personality is, hehe!

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