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by PoisonedWine

person Lavvy
schedule April 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Intresting story, I hope you will continue it one day! :-D
person LaffyTaffy
schedule May 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Has this story been officially abandoned? It's been so long since the last update and I just love it so I wanted to know if I should just give up on it or not.
person Astra
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON.I am loving this story but the waiting is driving me mad, please I want to see what happens and how it pans out.
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
update soon, please please please please. More must have more story I love it cant wait to see all four of them together...ooohhhh
person ethereal
schedule May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really love this story. Your characters are all so interesting. I can't wait to see how things develop between them all. Keep up the great work. I will be waiting impatiently for more!
person Lamia
schedule May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is just...wonderful. Seriously, I was looking for something good like this for AGES! Yes.
I love every character you made, they're very entertaining, somewhat alive and unique... Darryl just stole my heart xD Just like the pretty pleasure slave boy did, that is :3 I can't wait to see what will happen next and how will you solve the smex thiggy with the other 2 slaves ... But, I guess what I'd love to see most would be Zavian x Darryl (they seem so into themselves...like a cute marriage) and more(more,more!!!) Alex x Kenneth <3 Oh gosh. I do hope that you write more soon...Please? :> Fangasm will kill surely not only me if you don't...
person mdevries08
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited to get back from Christmas break and see that a new chapter for this story was up! This chapter was really good and I like the relationship between the characters. Can't wait for the next one!
person Sarkukka
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, it's really wonderful smut. So sweet and fluffy! =) It made me so happy.
Lovely Kenneth is getting what he's worth. And Alex is amazing owner.
Now I'm eager to know how Kenneth's going to handle Darryl and Zavian. I bet it'll be interesting and hot!*signs happily*
Thank you for this new chapter! And update again ASAP! I'm head over heels this fic!
person kylee123
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Happy Holidays. Awesome chapter. Alex is so gentle with Kenneth. I feel like Kenneth should bond (sleep) with Alex before he sleeps with Darryl and Zavian. I think it will be quite a while before Kenneth can feel comfortable with his new situation. I think it was a very good move on Alex's part to give Kenneth some pleasure on the first night without asking anything in return. I think it will be very interesting to see this foursome relationship will work out. I also wonder if Alex has been sleeping with Darryl and Zavian. You may have already told us in an earlier chapter.
person dorome
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this was a lpvely chapter. I like Kenneth personality, or better ileike all of your characters. Hope it won't be to long until the next chapter.