rate_review Reviews

What a dissapoinyment to be caught up with your lovely story. There were some bits that were a bit confusing, as to if the story was telling a memory or was in the present. I still have no idea what is going on with the seizures, so I hope that is coming up and I am not just being real dense for not figuring it out. I assume Mariejust walked into the room and I find it to be a bit hilarious, but I am evil like that and bask in others' misery. Good story so far.

Yikes! I hope Marie did not get into the house. They would have a hard time explaining themselves. The love scenes are very hot. Keep going. I am very interested in reading more of this story. Especially finding out what kinds of problems Vic is dealing with.

I am really getting into this story. I'm kinda confused tho, what's wrong w/Vic? Is he going thru withdrawal or something? Is he gonna be ok? I really liked the way you wrote his and Jack's feelings towards each other, when they didn't realize how the other one felt. I anxiously await the next chapter!

awww, poor guy, but jack seems the type to help. this story is sad and depressing, but also very addicting. Thank you for sharing.

I just started reading this story and I really like it. Vic's family is very liberal. I like that. I am eager to find out what happened in the past to mess him and Adam up so badly. I can't wait to see who will end up on top. Yes I have a one track mind. Keep up the good writing.

I like it. ^_^