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by keithcompany

schedule March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey there Keith!

So I just finished a two night marathon of reading nothing but Annie's Stories, and let me just say...the lack of sleep I will feel today in my uni lectures is t-o-t-a-l-l-y worth it! This is a completely amazing read. I kind of stumbled on it by accident when I was browsing the archives. What first drew me in was the idea of shrunken humans as exotic pets -- I've never heard/read of that concept before. But within a few chapters you had me absolutely hooked!

You're characters are absolutely endearing. From Annie with her smart mouth, to Pet with her sweet demeanour, to Denise and Ray with their kindness and love towards sylphs. It just makes what you write all the more entrancing. I must admit, I love your Annie lines -- "the thick plottens" or "Nuckin' futs" they make me giggle my ass off.

Also, I can't remember the exact references now (as its 8.30am and I've had no sleep) but there were many times as I was reading when I had one of those satisfying little moments of understanding when I thought "Oh, I totally get that reference, hehe".

I must admit to the fact I did not see Denise's sylphing coming -- it came as a complete shock, but after taking a moment to adjust to it, I realise that it fits in with the story, and where you've taken the story, which is intriguing and fascinating and exciting!

I am thoroughly enjoying losing myself in the vivid world of your storytelling! I look forward to more of your updates ^_^
~dusk.
person Anon
schedule August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh Keith you absolutely make my battle pro beatings worth it! THANKS FOR THE UPDATES!!! Poor Annie missed out on her weesome even if it technically was reverse of the traditional sense. And we poor readers have NO idea if Denny is getting big again or not! OR IF ANY OF THEM ARE! Grr! I don't think Annie would know what to do big again. Her pampered life would end.
schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well that development was completely unexpected. Can't wait to see more, or to find out it was just a dream or something.
schedule June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great to see an update! But, it use to be 112 chapters, did you cut a few out or combine them or something?
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved the Vacation section, one of my favorites that you have written. I would love in the future if the girls could meet more owned slyphs or get enrolled in a slyph daycare. And while were at it, can you do a new story in Land of Sylphs about shrunken identical twins or triplets? Puppy dog eye plea...
schedule July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, way to leave a cliff hanger. I hope everything turns out all right.
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Everytime I go away, you update. It is a conspiracy, I swear!
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man, I don't check for a couple of weeks and you update on me! Hoorah! I was just about to dA comment you begging for an update.
person Illsidi
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't say the state I'm in !! your story is really really AWSOME, I love it.
I was a little afraid first that it was a kinky sort, but wanted to try it anyway (doesn't make sense, I know, but I was really bored) So I started to read... and keep it
The characteristic of the personnages, the life, it's very real, believable, and the style of your writing is very good.
So I hope you make it very long, and long and long. Or start another story altogether wonderfull.
Thank you so much for submitting this work.

Awed reader
person Lil
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
D'awww! How cute! I'll be drawing the rain gear one of these days. :D