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Oh wow that last bit literally took my breath away.
I'm hating on the king big time, did he set it up to kill shinko?
I'm going all Colombo lol

Omg, I can't stop crying. Shinko ran over and saved Kato. But why did he have to die? Couldn't he live, Kato would know he saved his life, but he could still live! Now he has to marry Shisamora (I know, I can never get his name right, but now my eyes are all blurry and I don't care that I spelled his name wrong). I think he wanted to marry Shinko. I wanted him to marry Shinko.

Sharing the throne was actually a great idea. Too bad the brothers felt they couldn't share. Just b/c something like Ascension had been going on for years, doesn't mean it's right. And it is surprising that it's been going on for so long; people never considered alternatives?

I am so, so sad. I loved Shinko! I can't believe he's gone. Kato is going to be devastated. Why did a bomb go off anyway? Was the target Kato? Why?

I gotta get another box of Kleenex.

I'm dying here~ I'm re-reading the chapters leading up to Kato stating the two royals could "share" and I feel that it wasn't just the throne he was talking about. -looks to the sky and whistles- Ahem. Anyway, it'd still be crazy considering that Kato loves Noberu as well as the Shinko and Seshimora in his own way and what better way to get the three to get along but offer this choice that will make him happy as well as them? Update please! *pokes* Laiko, update, update, please~~~~~~ -throws popcorn in microwave- *pop*pop*pop*

*poke* :D It's August 1st! I wonder how many days until an update. -bounces in seat- I'm anticipating the next chapter and I can't wait for it to be posted. Update, update please~ -prepares pompoms-

Chapter 21. -tackles Laiko- Yay! you updated before i got to poke you! I was rooting for Noberu to nail Kaito. And Kaito's scheme to get the brothers to share him. Threesome! I can definitely see a challenge one-shot. Get the two brothers to share Kaito in a threesome! Or should I ask for a foursome with Noberu as well? OOOOOOO how my mind churns! Thankies Laiko for the update and I hope to read more from you soon!

Oh yes, you do remember that I was voting for The Bone Cage right? :D

As usual, that was awesome! Perfect! Cunning! And I want more...

hell yes, do a zombie fic.
But don't start it off with a zombie boyfriend. Did you know there was once a 5 part zombie fic on aff that I would have died for.
It was never finished and it got removed( I lost track of it and the author.
The premise was that there's a guy trying to survive in a zombie town(Like in movie I am legend, but the fic was written 2 years before th emovie even came out).There are other survivors too but he's independent(not living with them.he knows it is only a matter of time when his luck will run out. And that day has come. He's been caught by a zombie that still looks human enough(here the author gave such a canny description of how you could still see his big nose was broken a few times and healed before he turned.How he still had some hair onthe left side of scalp. And the skin that was removed and flayed from rottening and bites on the his hands, thigh and left shoulder.)To make things interesting the zombie was more succesfull&intelligent then others so he decided to keep his food(our survivor) for later. But other zombies keep trying to take his food away and he kills them of.Then he realizes that that he's in need.Not for food but for sex. Oho, now we're talking.Here the author did a great job too because she wrote(in pov of our survivor) that he was wtf?!he's not eating me, he wont fuck me will he?!
omo, OMG O_X can it be? And of course he faints during the rape cause of the smell&pain.
The last chapter ends with a cliffhanger when a large group of zombies attacks them and our survivor yells:Hey!I'm your food, right.You seem to have a few brain cells left.Are you gonna let them take me?


So I was wondering could your story be more reall(rot&bad smell& danger&survival& stranger meets another stranfger(zombie)¶normal(zombie needs to eat&fuck; might be able turn back to human) instead of the usual plot(boyfriends in love right away or after their separation)
Thanks.

Excellent, excellent chapter; I was at the edge of my seat the whole chapter!

But...I am confused, really confused. Did I miss something? When did Kato have sex? I thought he couldn't be penetrated. Did tuhis happen before his surgery? I know he's been w/Shinko twice; the first time when Redaku helped Shinko sneak into Kato's room, and the other time when they were on their picnic. But neither time did they have sex. What did I miss?

Ok, you are funny and I don't know why you think you're not! lol .....Have all the orgasms Shinko can give you before I have to kill him. OMFG that was hysterical!!!!!! I was laughing so hard, I almost fell off my stool!!!! lol

I was sure rooting for Kato at the end! He did GREAT! Yay for Kato! He is a bigger man (boy) than everyone gives him credit for. He actually FORGAVE Redaku! I would have NEVER forgiven that selfish S.O.B.

And poor Kato has to think of anything and everything he can to protect his children. He knows if he has more than one child, what the future holds for them. Good for him for standing up to Shinko and Seshimora! He came up with such an excellent suggestion: to both share the throne? Just because things are so heavily into tradition, that doesn't make them right.

This was such an amazing chapter!!!! I cannot wait until the next one!

Please update this story. It is a great story. It has intrigue, drama, suspense, romance, action, and so much more. It is written well, which makes it all the more enjoyable (and easy to read). Your beta is doing an excellent job. Keep at it! I hope this romance story continues on for quite a while, but with the same attention to detail that you have been giving it. Please update soon.

Thank you,
Oni