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for The Twin Thrones

by Laiko

person Jazz
schedule September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really am getting into this story. I believe this is a rewrite? I hope you continue, you're doing a good job.
person Jazz
schedule September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Seems like foreshadowing to me :) (the incident with the adviser and body guard)
What a sad family, you'd think in 2000 years someone strong enough to survive would have refused to kill their siblings...but I guess then there wouldn't be a story :P
person puorla
schedule September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
what happened where's the story?
schedule September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Woah, did you end the other story??? What rock have I been hiding under? Or does this story continue where you left off last chapter? I'm confused.


Maybe I should read the chapters first. Idk......lol
schedule September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm confused :( I skim read the first chapter n I'm pretty sure it's the same as the original, are you editing, including the title or what exactly is going on? :/
<------ naturally confused person
schedule August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was really moving... So sad.. I was seriously vouching for Shinko too... I love it, can't wait for more.
person Anon
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg you killed Shinko???!!! I wanted them to share :( Cant wait for the next update, though I now dread what new misery it will bring for Kato.
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you killed Shinko, I totally thought he and Kato would get married. Did Yoshi kill his own son becuase Kato didn't want his children to kill each other? OMG, if I didn't hate the man before I hate him now. Poor Kato, I don't think he'll get over that. I guess that means he's marrying the brother (I can't spell his name) what a shame, I was totally team Shinko. Unless he's dead too, then that leave Yoshi, ewww. Looking forward to the next update even though it will most likely make me sad....
person Divanora
schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw, man, I was really rooting for Shinko. :( But you are right, as nice (and sexy!) as the thought of the two brothers sharing the throne would be, it wouldn't work. The brothers wouldn't accept it and the people wouldn't accept it. It would be like taking the US democratic process and saying oh, well, let's just pick both candidates (less bloody, but along the same lines)

Why do I think that King Yoshi had something to do w/ the bomb? We all know who his favourite is!

Can't wait to see what happens now.
person lakuniko
schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm sad that Shinko'd to been gone. but this is a great chapter as always.
thank you for your update.
Can't wait for the next update.

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