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ZOMG! Babies on the way! Eek!
I was really sad when Shi died. Couldn't believe he really, really, really loved K. 0.0
I sort of felt like squealing at the last part when the "Caveman" was thinking about K and the babies and loving them and all that. Bwaaaaaa :'(
Why can't they run away and live happily ever after?

Well, reading about Shinko's death again, and then reading about the funeral, made me cry all over again.

I was impressed that Shinko talked w/Sheshimora (sorry about the spelling) about Noberu's love for Kato. About sharing his love with them.

I'm looking forward to reading about his pregnancy.

You have a great imagination when writing about the politics and policies of these different nations; it was very interesting reading about it.

Chapter 22. Yay! *tackles Laiko* You've updated! I've struggled with how the sharing of Kato will be between Seshimora and Noberu, yet I was wondering if King Yoshi will be a participant as well. :D Odd enough Laiko, you've gone and threw me a curve ball with this chapter. King Yoshi being an ass with Kato and Seshimora being a gentleman with Kato knowing that Noberu was the main pitcher. I wonder if Kato will come to love Seshimora over the years while his belly grows and he gets to know Seshimora. Should that does happen, will Noberu then give Seshimora the chance to show himself to the two of them since Noberu didn't give Shinko that. Hm... A threesome between Seshimora, Kato, and Noberu? Or will Seshimora give Noberu an opportunity to have a child of his own? The way this chapter ended made it sound like it's the last chapter! Laiko, is this so? Heehee~ Thanks for the update! And it's still awesome reading the long chapters! <33~

Well that was wierd interesting but weird. I don't really know what to say to this I wanted Kato to be with Sesshimora but I guess I figured Sesshimora would take a bigger role it's just kind of a strange story I guess very different from the ones I normally read mainly cause I'm not really into sharing lovers and all that I was looking forward to the conception but it turned out way different than what I thought it would be how very medical and cold it was what a way for a life to come into being actually all the medical stuff wasn't real interesting but it was different. The bombing is a bit confusing were they after Shinko or Kato and did Sesshimora have anything to do with it or not. Actually I wish Shinko hadn't died but their creepy father had. You can add Kato's idiot of a father in with that to. Personally my dad died before I was born and I think I would perfer it that way rather than have a father like either of those two just ewwwwww. I mean if your father doesn't love you and show it what good is he any way when I was little I use to think that fathers were only good for hugging you and playing with you otherwise mom's or grandfathers did everything else I realized I was wrong when I got older and fell in love but still I'll stay tuned to see where else you take this or at least I'll try.

:D *poke*poke* Hope to see a new chapter soon! *poke*poke* xD heading out to forum~ <333~ Keep up the great work!

This story is amazing, I'm so glad you're reposting it or I would have never found it. It's so complete, researched and emotional... can't wait to see what happens. :)

Hello! I was a new reader lol I started reading this right before you edited it and, then when I looked and things were a bit different I panicked. That is until you put up you were editing. So I got to start this story anew ^ - ^ I really enjoy it though I'm so worried over whats going to happen next D: Happy ending or no..it's killing me but, I plan on reading more and will not let my hopes get too high XD

Wow, I love this story, I really hope you update soon, especially with challenge right around the corner! can't wait to see what happens. awesome work!

Well, you're doing a great job at editing; altho I thought the story was perfect the way it was. I always looked forward to your updates!

It's just hard for me to read this over when I know the ending isn't changing. But I will.

Ok, I read through these three chapters, altho it was rather depressing to read about Shinko again, b/c I loved his character. So, anyway, it seems like these chapters are more concise and more generalizations happen that aren't as detailed as the main story. For example, the whole think where Shinko sneaks into Kato's room, didn't that take many, many chapters to happen? Not the second one!

So, are you totally re-working the story and coming up with a DIFFERENT ending? One can only hope....you know I spent DAYS in mourning after that ending!