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for The Twin Thrones

by Laiko

schedule January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo!
Damn Noberu, Kato's first time was supposed to be with him. That idiot! Although I think it's nice that Kato and Seshimora get along. I was actually even hoping they'd be friends or something, but not get romatically involved. I hope Kato's feelings don't change about Noberu, that he'd start having feelings for Seshimora and forget all about Noberu.

Oh, and I hope Seshimora would have beaten King Yoshi a little bit more, like broken his nose or something. That guy pisses me off, he's so annoying!

I'm glad I finally got to know what exactly happend with Kato and his kidnappers. It was really frustrating to not know and I thought it would not be mentioned.

Haha, that was a lot of hopes and wishes :D But the story is awesome, I can't wait for the next chapter!
person lala
schedule December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't like Noberu! ..... Love the story though
person nala
schedule December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's so sad that Shinko died. He's my favorite character. =(
person amatista
schedule December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hola, me pregunto cuantas de tus lectores te han reclamado por la muerte de Shinko, yo ya que iba haciendo la idea de un trió entre el sexy, sensual Shinko, el dulce y particular Seshimora, y nuestro pequeño, adorable y explosivo Kato y me dejaste impactada con su repentina muerte :(
Del capitulo de la muerte de Shinko termine llorando, no lo podía creer T^T, me encantaba su personaje era tan misterioso, sexy, salvaje y su muerte simplemente he llorado y llorado, aumque me es dificil creer que haya muerte, tuve que leer varias veces, hasta aceptar la terrible realidad
Ahora Kato esta tras de Mr. Haitatsu no se porque, no me agrada el hombre de las cavernas, creo una pequeño parte que leo la historia es para ver en que momento su personaje se retira, ir tras Kato aunque por su trabajo si que tiene que ser suicida.
Me gusto el ultimo capitulo Seshimora adora a Kato y creo que es capas de protegerlo ante incluso el mismo, es demasiado bueno (=3
person lazy dog
schedule December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really really enjoy reading your story!! I love how you write! =) Hope you finish this story !
schedule November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, the chapter started out pretty bad, I mean with Kato's abduction, not with your writing! lol So, with his abduction, those people were able to show Kato his past at the castle. How did they know all that happened to him?

And I think Noberu was being very noble, telling Kato he should be with Shesimora. I actually wanted Kato and Shesimora to get to know one another.

Great chapter, as usual! Looking forward to the next one, hopefully they'll both realize that their marriage can be more than a "duty".
person lakuniko
schedule November 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very awesome chapter.
When I read this chap I feel really miss Shinko.
finally bed scene and Seshimora pov. this chapter have it all.
Thanks a lot for update.
person Anon
schedule November 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You know what? It's strangely refreshing to read a sex scene that's just so...awkward. It makes it more realistic I think. You wrote it well and did a good job conveying the frustration that comes from both partners not knowing what the hell they're supposed to do. I'm glad that Kato finally gave Seshimora a chance and that we got a deeper look at the inner workings of Seshimora's personality. I can't wait to read more.
person jdbbrz27
schedule November 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well that was estremely interesting Both Noberu and Sessamore are real well idiots I mean both thought that little Kato had sex with Shinko which was just stupid just because the guy was between the kids legs with the talk they had it was obvious neither intended to comlete that part jeez doesn't either guy ever listen or like a lot of real guys does the picture may their brain zap out. Kind of weird that Nubaru thought that Sessamore should be Kato's first but well the whold situation is kind of wacked out. Sesshamore and Kato's first time was hilarious and very sweet and touching it usually is when the blind lead the blind and neither know what their doing and his I watched a video jeez I laughed so hard at that I mean wheeee he watched a whole video now he knows where all the parts are but I guess not considering he had such a hard time finding the prostrate. Oh and someone should just kill the old man he's just a creep and should never be around any grand children ever and should always be kept away from Kato can't wait to see where else this one goes thanks so much for sharing this with us though I was kind of wondering why you changed the title of the story from the Prince of Peace to Twin Thrones took a awhile for me to find it last time. Thanks again.
person toni
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
is this the end of this story or will you still continue on? brought tears to my eyes.... XD