rate_review Reviews

Interesting story, it feels as if it is slowly gaining momentum. If I had any criticism of it, it would be that Prince Kato has been portrayed so far as being rather vapid and rather too easily swayed. I would have thought that anyone brought up to rule would have been trained in giving commands - instead of being commanded? Only a thought.

I do love Shinto - he is shaping up to be a rake (a la Regency period) and quite the lecher, but you flesh him out well (pun intended) and personality shines through the piece. Fusako is enigmatic and nicely mysterious, perhaps more of her will also emerge as the story unfolds? As for the others I suppose we will have to wait and see?

Thanks for an entertaining piece.

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great chapter, I love this story and can´t wait for what will happen next in this universe

thank you for new chapter *happy*

I really like this story. I just found it today. I like all the characters but I really love Shinko. He is so outrageous. There is probably a mean streak somewhere but he is so sexy. I really hope Kato does not get a vagina. I hope he stays all male. Looking forward to the next update.

So far I like it - when dealing with male pregnancy, it is always a challenge to make it not only 'believable' but done right not to piss off the viewers.

I like the different personalities of the royal family, but if you want to 'add' to them, you could always try a few sections with their perspective, or thought process. That can always make it interesting.

I like how this is developing. I'm not normally a fan of Mpreg but I make an exception in this case. I especially liked the beginning of chapter four, with the very sexy scene in the bedroom! Hot hot hot!

hello your story is great, can´t wait what will happen next

I really like your story! And...I know he's not technically the hero (I think), but I really like Shinko!

I thought this chapter was the best you've written
so far. Don't be so hard on yourself. Self-criticism
can be good and all but don't let it totally kill
your mojo.
This [the story] flows really well in general and you're writing
is solid.

Awesome Job!
~WR

ugh i waited forever for you to update but it was very well worth it
yummiesness!