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June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story very great.
very Si-fi and so full of detail.
very love this.
very Si-fi and so full of detail.
very love this.
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June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Laiko, I'm sorry to hear about your mom. I hope she's better now. You do sound awfully busy; I hope you find the time to update tho. I was SO happy when I came across your story tonight. I haven't been able to be on here for two days and let me tell you, I had withdrawal! Seriously, this stuff is bad when you don't want to do anything else except read! And yes, my kids know better now, when they see me reading (shielding the screen from wandering eyes! hahahha), they know not to bother me! Hahah j/k, but really, your story ROCKS!!!! You are so detailed w/the pregnancy thing and OMG, who would think of stuff like that; what an awesome imagination you have!!!! Again, I hope you update soon, even tho I know life gets in the way of writing (and reading). Thank you for a great chapter!
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June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
as always, the chapter was great, until now I have no idea what will happen next, I really love that about the story, to not know what will happen.Sending you virtually cookies and puppy eyes for more
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June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I am surprised (in a good way) at how lusty Prince Kato is. I am glad that he is getting closer to Noberu because Kato needs to have at least one friend throughout this whole thing. Prince Shinko is very sexy but I wonder if real love can develop between him and Kato. I think Princess Fusako may have just killed the attraction that Kato felt for her. I cant wait to see more Kato/Noberu action. They are very hot together. I am sad for Kato because it seems that there is no one that he can trust aside from Noberu.
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June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Again, another awesome update.
I'm glad to see Noberu and Kato are getting closer.
His presence as a lover and protector will give Kato some stability.
Well temporarily, at least.
Porn binge, huh? Well update soon as your muse
permits you.
~WR
I'm glad to see Noberu and Kato are getting closer.
His presence as a lover and protector will give Kato some stability.
Well temporarily, at least.
Porn binge, huh? Well update soon as your muse
permits you.
~WR
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June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't stop reading this. I started yesterday, in between bus stops, dinners, bedtimes, school, etc. I couldn't stop. The poor kids had to eat leftovers b/c I was glued to this damn computer! This is one of the most riveting stories I have read on here. It is amazing. I am so sorry there aren't any more chapters for me to read!!! I don't usually get into futuristic stories, but your writing is just so amazing, I was hooked from the first chapter. Your descriptions of everything, from the rooms Kato is in, to the fruits on the tables, incredible; so realistic. OMG, please update quick!!!! I'm gonna go thru withdrawals!!!!!
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June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just reviewed, but I had to comment some more! I was reading all your reviews and the one before mine said something about Kato being too easy and he should have never let Shinko seduce him. But....wasn't he given the rape drug? So, could he have really fended him off? It seemed w/the drug, Kato was more than willing, right? Or maybe I'm totally off base. Anyway, I also want to comment on one of the siblings, Seisimoto (I know I totally fucked up that spelling, sorry!). Why is Kato so afraid of him, b/c he had to kill his brother? It seems he fears him b/c he's a big guy, like his father. I personally think Seisimoto is sweet and endearing. Maybe I'm just weird....But, pls., pls., update soooonnnnnnn1!!!!
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June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this story at first, but then i got to chapter 4 and saw how easy you make Keto. it was dissapointing. For Keto to be so willing and easy was disgusting. does he have no morals? i'm unsure if i want to read any farther. with all the things happening in his life i dont see him being so open to sleeping with a man, especially the man who was being so outragious and rude at dinner. AND he's a virgin. MOST virgins are not that easy to jump in bed if they've stayed virgin up to the age of majority. he's far to mature to be acting like some love sick teenage girl. it just seems stupid and unrealistic to me.
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May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great chapter as always, pleas more puppy eyes
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May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the chapter was awesome as always. I love your story, sorry for repeating it every time