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Hi Hi thank you thank you for updating I feel like I've been waiting an eternity. Glad you enjoyed Minneapolis I use to live there years ago and loved it I really miss all the fountains and lakes in and around the city. Tell your son he should appreciate your advise and remember it cause you didn't get to your age without a reason right. The story is amazing I have to admit I have to say I don't see Kato as a slut that's ridiculous he's just a naive virgin kid with hormones which he has a whole lot of now with his shots and such it's amazing that everything and everyone doesn't turn him on. Shinko on the other hand is a lowlife shi oops I mean slut. Talk about a dangerous con artist hustler Naberu should take him down a notch or two for taking such blantent advantage of poor sweet Kato. Sishy should try getting over his sweet shyness and show Kato more of how he feels about him I think Kato could find love with a sweet sensitive yet strong guy like him. Nabaru needs to control himself more I mean he's there to guard this kid not make love to him. Radaku needs to be taken out what a creep he is he is defindently up to some dirty double dealings the little shi I mean jerk talk about a two faced backstabbing creep and if he's not I'd be really surprised. As far as Kato's father goes I think him and his whole in the dark ages planet needs a little shaking up with a female ruler like it or not. But maybe not one married into it but born into it one they would be forced to accept and who ruled better than all the others that would be cool. Especially if the whole rest of the galaxy accepted and loved her. Despite everything sweet Kato has gone through I like that you made him one strong young man who won't just put up with anything very cool. The girl is a bit distracting and I like her I hope you can find a way for her to survive. I love the whole Mpreg in fact that's why I started reading your story and I can't wait for Kato to get pregnant and have a beautiful baby although I am a little confused how it all works how can he concieve if he isn't screwed first that part I am a little lost on but I have every confidence that you will clear it up in time. I can't wait for your next update I am on pins and needles I looooooooove your imagination it is so fascinating. Keep up this awesome work please for a while I thought you were one of them who started a great story and doesn't finish it those make me crazy especially when I am hooked like a fish. Thank you for continuing this from the bottom of my nutzoid heart count on my readership and now I will flop around waiting for my next breath with your next update you are awesome. Thank you Thank you.

I really like your story it is so interesting and intriguing I am waiting with anticipation for your next update. Actually I have been reading stories on here for a while but yours and some others finally convinced me to join mainly so I can tell all of you how great these stories are. I really can't wait to find out what happens next and who he will end up with and everything else please hurry and thank you for writing it.

Yay!!!! Finally an update!!!! How's your mom doing, btw? This is one of my favorite stories! It is so intriguing, imaginative and passionate! Actually, I am REALLY liking Shinko! I'd go for him way before Nubero (I spelled his name wrong, didn't I? Sorry). And wow, yeah Nubero is really jealous; it's too bad, he knows he could never have Kato. And actually I like Sheishamora (I know I REALLY fucked up that spelling!!!). Even tho he killed his brother, he had to or he would have died. I just can't imagine having children and having some stupid tradition like this rule your family. Your imagination is so thought-provoking! Anyway, I do like the scenes between Kato and Shinko; Kato's resolve slowly disintegrating the longer he's around Shinko. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Hi, it's me again :)

I almost jumped with joy seeing the story updated. Thanks for hurrying up with the chapter and ...

It was great, nod nod. I'm trying to imagine which way it's going to go for Kato. He's supposed to marry one of Kitsurin's royalty, we still don't know which one. I guess the fluffer in me wants him to hook up with Noberu, nod nod but I'm trying to imagine HOW that would be possible. With Kato's sense of duty, with the whole situation he's in, the Twin Planets and Ascention, it is almost impossible. Unless it's Noberu that spomehow gets rid of the Kitsurin Royal Family and takes over the throne.

Surprisingly, I like Shinko, even if he's a pregnancy-obsessed perv.

Keep up the good work and yup, sleeplessness sometimes does miracles to one's creativity :P

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I want to see Noberu and the prince together, that's who i'm cheering for.

Oh, very good. I realy like this story

Im really enjoying this fic. Kato and Noberu seem a good pair but im secretly hoping that it is actually Seshimaru(if thats spelt right) that ends up with Kato.

Im sorry to hear about your troubles and i hope your mum is feeling better.
Keep up the good work and update soon plz xx

Thanks for the update. I am glad that Kato kept all his original parts after the "procedure." Sehshimora seems to be a caring guy but he would probably take good care of Kato. I can't get over him killing his brother that he loved. I am still rooting for Shinko because he is o outrageously sexy. I agree that this story is definitely more about making it through each challenge as opposed to searching for a happy ending. The whole nature of the story kind of rules out the simple happy ending. I wonder how Kato feels about giving birth to children who will end up killing each other in the future.

Seshimora gets the award for character with the most frequently misspelled name

That's one of the most credible and believable Mpregs I've ever read, anatomically-wise. And at the same time a masterpiece of plot and intrigue, nod nod :) I haven't enjoyed many Mpregs but this story is definitely among those which I did enjoy and I'm looking forward to the update. I hope that among so many things you have to do you'll find some time to write so that you can treat us to another chapter of this awesome story.

Good luck anyway!