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Congratz for ur story,it s rly interesting.I love Noberu,he seem to be a gr8 man,and he loves Kato,& i hate prince Shinko.I hope that Kato 1st time will be with Noberu,and his 1st kid too.So pretty pls update soon ,and maybe some action between Kato & Noberu

woot! love the way chapter six ended!! Noberu's as charming as when i first met him. dang he's sexy hot. -kicks head out of gutter- now if u ever get this story published, i'm definitely in to buy a few copies for myself. :D

:D You've gotten me. Bait, hook, sinker and line. XD Your writing is full of original charm with a universe of it's own. The names of your character don't sound cliche even though Japanese names are sometimes over used in many stories. There's a natural flow to each character's persona and the many facets of the world your building fascinates me even more with each chapter. Great writers like you are what makes me want to read. :D

I can't wait to read more of this story!

Well I finally had a chance to read this haven't had a chance with work and now the holidays but I thought the chapter was thoughtful and incisive very very good. I like Sesh what ever his name is to long any way he's very sweet and loving in his own way and doesn't come off as a brassy no it all jerk like Shinko. And choosing a way of a warrier especially for a girl in Fusakos position is just a coward's way out she might as well just slit her own throat since she doesn't stand a chance of winning it seems anyway and for Shinko to murder her in this way is just as wussy and for everyone to escept it well the whole universe just sounds cowardly they all seem to perfer death to living and living is a hell of a lot harder. But I love your story mainly for the Mpreg god I am so glad you didn't turn him into a girl I am so sick of that cause then it is no longer Mpreg but just a preg and that is so boring I usually quit reading unless I really really love the story to turn them into a girl is just an easy way out and doesn't take any imagination at all so thank you thank you thank you and I am so looking forward to your next update.

Sorry to bother, but is there a chapter 14.1 or does it just skip to 14.2, cause it doesn't seem to make much sense this way? Thanks! I really like the story and am enjoying reading it very much. Please keep it up!

Hello Laiko-- just wanted to drop you a review of your story The Prince for Peace. It is an easy read, carrying me along effortlessly. The characters are nicely fleshed out, feeling very real and three dimensional. In particular you've done very well with making Kato a character that invites caring. I'm wondering what he will do, what the consequences will be.... I do not know if it was your intent, but I see a very strong relationship developing between him and his guard, though in the laster chapters you seem to have backed off from that. The politics are a little too real, everyone angling for position in the background, and everyone feeling they know what is best...
I am eagerly awaiting more chapters, and find myself praying that the muses will bless you. Neichan

Awesome work! You write all your characters with such intensity, its unbelievable! Keep up the great work!

Aaahhh, I can't make up my mind. Each time I read this, I'm like, yea, I want Kato to end up with ____. And then I read the next chapter and I change my mind. I guess that shows just how interesting your characters are :)

Well, this was a truly depressing chapter! It was hard to read, knowing that the next chapter will probably be about poor Fausko (did I spell her name right?) death. I didn't know that Fausko and Shinko have the same mom, but Shishimora doesn't. So, they're half siblings to Shishimora. So, does that mean he has to kill her, or Shinko?