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March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So, I've been reading through you story and absolutely loving the angst; and I just had a thought - if Kato hates the siblings having to kill each other off for Ascension now, how is he going to feel when it's his kids? I mean, personally I hope he ends with Noberu anyway, but that would be another thing for the poor boy to angst over! :-p
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March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey there - just wanted to let you know that I am really enjoying this fic. I've never read an Mpreg story that had such a credible premise before. You have such a vivid imagination! I love the whole 2 worlds vying for peace revolving around an arranged marriage, portrayed in such a realistic way before. And it is really soul destroying to see how the ascencion to rule thing works. So much pride, honor, and ultimately the death of such strong characters. I love the way you are dealing with the issues, and can't wait to read more.
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March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story recently and a read every free minute I could spare. I really love this story, can't wait to read how it ends. =)
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March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOVELY!!!
Oh my dear, this is really the best chapter so far.... that was so freaking sexy!!!
I hope you repeat this kind of sexy scenes soon, very very soon.
By the way I prefer Sehimora to Shinko!! :P
Bye
Oh my dear, this is really the best chapter so far.... that was so freaking sexy!!!
I hope you repeat this kind of sexy scenes soon, very very soon.
By the way I prefer Sehimora to Shinko!! :P
Bye
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February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
MAn, these are the best two chapters of my life.
I loved the cliffie, and I loved seeing NoberU and Kato together.
Yes it was believable, realistic and thrilling to read.
The fight scene and the sex scene.And you've done it, youbuild up their relationship and instead of making it drag, you moved the story further8 and their relations together)on a next level. Bravo, I'm speechless.
I loved the cliffie, and I loved seeing NoberU and Kato together.
Yes it was believable, realistic and thrilling to read.
The fight scene and the sex scene.And you've done it, youbuild up their relationship and instead of making it drag, you moved the story further8 and their relations together)on a next level. Bravo, I'm speechless.
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February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow chapter 17 was pure hotness! I'm right there with Noberu hoping it happens again sometime real soon. Great chapter! Love this story
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February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You're such a tease, i really wanted to rush through the chapter to see who had won but then i didnt want to incase i was disappointed lol. xx
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February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, thank God Shinko lived! But, I do feel horrible about Fausko. My opinion remains; it is such a horrible tradition to kill one of your own so that someone else can Ascend. Horrible.
But why did Kato "seduce" Nebaru(I know I spelled that wrong; sorry)if he's supposed to be with either Shinko or Shesimora?
But why did Kato "seduce" Nebaru(I know I spelled that wrong; sorry)if he's supposed to be with either Shinko or Shesimora?
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February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is wonderful and well written.
I don't like it, Shinko's death( I mean).
But it was time for a duel.
And someone had to die.
This story seemed to drag a bit for a while( with talk talk talk, Noberu is confused, Kato is scared) I hope from now on that it wont be long before soemone ascends and then I can read about Kato's life.
Cause so far it's all about Ritsuin royalti ascension.
And I'm more inerested in what kind of power( political) and what will Kato do.
And where does Noberu fit in?
I don't like it, Shinko's death( I mean).
But it was time for a duel.
And someone had to die.
This story seemed to drag a bit for a while( with talk talk talk, Noberu is confused, Kato is scared) I hope from now on that it wont be long before soemone ascends and then I can read about Kato's life.
Cause so far it's all about Ritsuin royalti ascension.
And I'm more inerested in what kind of power( political) and what will Kato do.
And where does Noberu fit in?
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February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Incredible chapter as always!!!